No Longer Human: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010.

  1. AWESOME JOB ITS SO GREAT UR AWESOME!!!!!!
     
  2. When r the next chapters coming
     
  3. Today hopefully  im just so busy
     
  4. Can I be a supporting character? Where's the signup thread
     
  5. Gloomi I promise if I ever visit I'll finish this story..
     
  6. Ok gloomi now turn that frown to a smile
     
  7. My chapter is almost written, but I have to leave. It will be posted tomorrow, I promise.
     
  8. AARRRGGHHH I WANTZ THE NEXT CHAPTERZZZ


    Good story btw
     
  9. Next chapter UP! Its not very good, just warning you... I had a minor case of writer's block
     
  10. Yaaaaay I'm pissed at humansand for some reason I growl alot too but that's okay
     
  11. Lolz IDK why you growl, but it seemed like the right thing to do...
     
  12. Btw gloom nice job I just finished the first two chapters of my novel please check out
     
  13. Wow. It's looking really great so far. Can't wait for the next post
     
  14. It's great, gloomi!
     
  15. ITS FAN-FICTION-TASTIC!!
     
  16. Lolz I guess that's y he's crayz!
     
  17. I don't c it gloom can u tell why he's crazy
     
  18. He doesn't use his inside voice 
     
  19. Hmm good point u should c what he put on my feedback it was pretty cool