No Longer Human: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010.

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  1. You mean she?
     
    #61 DarkFalcon, Aug 20, 2010
  2. Gloomis a girl didn't know that sorry gloom
     
    #62 german_idiot, Aug 20, 2010
  3. That's ok 
     
    #63 *iPimella (01), Aug 20, 2010
  4. YAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
     
    #64 german_idiot, Aug 20, 2010
  5. ?
     
    #65 *iPimella (01), Aug 20, 2010
  6. names says it all I'm kind of an idiot
     
    #66 german_idiot, Aug 20, 2010
  7. I'll try to get a chapter in tomorrow, but it'll most likely be Monday. Sorry 4 the wait but RL is really busy for me now.
     
    #67 *iPimella (01), Aug 22, 2010
  8. Take ur time I can wait 
     
    #68 german_idiot, Aug 22, 2010
  9. Chapter 7 and 8 up! BTW im not accepting anymore characters. Sorry about your luck people :(
     
    #69 *iPimella (01), Aug 23, 2010
  10. Cool they were good gloomi
     
    #70 german_idiot, Aug 24, 2010
  11. Love it 
     
    #71 detroit-lions-fan, Aug 24, 2010
  12. Awesome story gloomi. This is rather interesting and unique :D
     
    #72 *koala_net (01), Aug 24, 2010
  13. It's Amazing so far! Keep going!
     
    #73 *Irin (01), Aug 24, 2010
  14. You saw ur wolfie in action
     
    #74 *iPimella (01), Aug 25, 2010
  15. Chapter 9 and 10 up, end of part one.
     
    #75 *iPimella (01), Aug 25, 2010
  16. wow....that was AWESOME!!!
    Sry...I get into the stories I read
     
    #76 WW1225, Aug 25, 2010
  17. Good job


    I KILLZ ALL TEM CIvILIANS!!!!
     
    #77 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 25, 2010
  18. I'm not sure if he was serious yet, I still have to decide.
     
    #78 *iPimella (01), Aug 25, 2010
  19. Can't wait dr part 2!!!!
     
    #79 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 25, 2010
  20. Awesome!!!!I like it
     
    #80 german_idiot, Aug 25, 2010
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