No Longer Human: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010.

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  1. Short chapter 3 is up.
    Sneak Peak! Chapter 4 will involve Dylan and chapter 5 will have all the antis be introduced.
     
    #21 *iPimella (01), Aug 18, 2010
  2. Chapter 4
     
    #22 *iPimella (01), Aug 18, 2010
  3. :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
     
    #23 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 18, 2010
  4. ANTI ANTI ANTI



    ANTI FTW!!!
     
    #24 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 18, 2010
  5. Hey where am I in all of this? After pummeling blade I'm no where to be found....
     
    #25 *Utho (01), Aug 18, 2010
  6. hehehe good story
     
    #26 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 18, 2010
  7. You are delivering blade. I swear you said something in chapter two
     
    #27 *iPimella (01), Aug 19, 2010
  8. We did deliver Blade. Then you just kinda left me there lol
     
    #28 *Utho (01), Aug 19, 2010
  9. Where's antis?
     
    #29 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 19, 2010
  10. Well aynia wasnt with them. This is from a different point of view. Irian is with you Aynia just found Dylan
     
    #30 *iPimella (01), Aug 19, 2010
  11. I have the chapter written but my computers Internet is down. I'll post it tomorrow.
     
    #31 *iPimella (01), Aug 19, 2010
  12. Kool. Btw I made a tiny extra cliffhanger DT chapter if ya wanna check it out
     
    #32 *Utho (01), Aug 19, 2010
  13. Ok I will
     
    #33 *iPimella (01), Aug 19, 2010
  14. Love it can't wait for next chapter
     
    #34 detroit-lions-fan, Aug 19, 2010
  15. 5 and 6 UP! I lied, 6 is where the antis appear. I made it longer than I had originally planned though.
     
    #35 *iPimella (01), Aug 19, 2010
  16. Ant FTW!!!
     
    #36 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 19, 2010
  17. WOOO!!!! Antis!
    My character is cool
     
    #37 CrayzJayz, Aug 19, 2010
  18. Sandstorm FTW!!!
     
    #38 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 19, 2010
  19. Is Dylan pro war or anti war?
     
    #39 detroit-lions-fan, Aug 19, 2010
  20. @bjorn highfive
     
    #40 CrayzJayz, Aug 19, 2010
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