Here's how could make your idea better with example. Ps. this isn't mine, someone asked me to improve upon their idea but never got back to me to claim it. And no bb codes to make it look pretty either. ...................................................................... My idea is about a eb where we battle a sand worm. GOLIATH, THE DEVOURER Part 1/? The city of the legendary sand worm slayers lays in the dunes of the forgotten sands off Bazier but can you face the ancient sand worm? Phase 1 Scout - ( 25,000 / 25,000 ) Scout the desert for any signs of this mythical city. Main bar - Giant sand worm 100% - 95% Attack/assassinate ( 100,000 / 100,000 ) Phase 2 (Update) - A band of men in sand worm amour are seen over the sand dunes riding what seems to be a lesser sand worms. Attack / assassinate - ( 25,000 / 25,000 ) Slay this small raiding party Main bar - Giant sand worm 95% - 90% Attack/assassinate ( 95,000 / 100,000 ) Phase 3 (Update ) - The great sand worm burrows into an hole near while the sand raiders attack Attack ( 45,000 / 45,000 ) - Regens every 10 mins ( 4,500 ) - Kill the lesser sand worms the raiders are riding, Assassination ( 35,000 / 35,000 ) - Regens every 10 mins ( 3,500 ) - Use your spies to pick off the sand raiders raining arrows on your men a and send them Main bar - Giant sand worm 90% - 80% Attack/assassinate ( 90,000 / 100,000 ) Phase 4 part 1 ( update ) - The earth shudders under your feet as an monstrous sand worm comes barreling though the hole to face you again. Item mythical rope ( 8,000 / 8,000) Use the rope the ancient sand worm slayers used to pin the giant worm down. Phase 4 part 2 Attack ( 2,000 / 2,000 ) Use your sharpest steel to cut into the thick hide Phase 4 part 3 Attack ( 15,000 / 15,000 ) - Regens every 10mins ( 5,000 ) - Lesser sand worms are summoned by the giant worm Attack / Assassinate ( 35,000 / 35,000 ) The raiders now rallied again come to face you again. - Optional - Steal ( 50,000 / 50,000 ) Your army is distracted by collecting the rare sand worm materials Main bar - Giant sand worm 80% - 0% Attack/ assassinate ( 80,000 / 100,000 ) ( Update ) - the Giant worm barely breaks free of the rope and retreats into the ground to recover. - POSSIBLE EQ DROPS - TOOTHED DAGGER *insert example* SAND HIDE BOOTS *insert example* SAND HIDE CHEST *insert example* RING OF THE EARTH *insert example* SAND HIDE ARMS *insert example* Only a few of these items will be in the eb
Here's one that I made a while back, you may recognize it: The Assault on ATA These apes have been destroying the animal kingdom and destroying kingdoms. Now is the time we take revenge on them! #1. Find the Headquarters - 12 hours For too long these apes have killed our animal friends and make us kill our own people. It is time we take revenge on them! Phase 1 We must find their headquarters! Search through Vancouver for the ATA headquarters. Scout: 94,500/94,500 Every spot in Vancouver must be searched, none shall survive the onslaught Steal: 120,000/120,000 (optional) People have deserted their homes because of this assault. Send your swiftest spies to steal their valuables! Main Bar- Attack to 78% Phase 2 We have located their headquarters, yet they send their fellow apes to assault us! We must destroy them! Attackinate: 120,000/120,000 Destroy ATA's grunts, we must advance past their ranks and assault their kingdom. Item- Locust Swarm 200,000/200,000 These bugs have been used by ATA for many experiments. They want revenge too. Command these bugs and they will help destroy the apes armor. Main Bar- Attack to 8% Phase 3 In a desperate attempt to stop you, they send their Unkari warriors and Fang hunters to stop you! Attackinate: 300,000/300,000 (requires Moth equip) The Rime Hunters try to stop you from entering the Kingdom of ATA. We will use their own weapons against them to defeat their frozen armor. Assassinate: 450,000/450,000 The Unkari warriors try to stop you from entering the Kingdom of ATA. Using heavily feathered shields, you'll have to send your assassins to attack from behind. Main Bar- Attack to 0% Congratulations! You have successfully entered the kingdom of ATA! Payout: > Smoke Signals Rewards Monkey Spear - 10,000,000 Att/Spy Att Monkey Helm - 21,000,000 Defense/Spy Def Monkey Armor - 50,000,000 Defense/Spy Def Monkey Shield - 38,500,000 Defense/Spy Def 14,000,000 Attack/Spy Att EB #2 Coming soon! SPOILER: Part 2 Never Came.