Naruto Fan Fiction FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by bellalautner, Jul 13, 2011.

  1. Oops didn't mean to double post
     
  2. Updated my naruto Fan Fiction
     
  3. Ooooh! I love it so far! Post the next part soon! 
     
  4. Thxs for reading
     
  5. I really really REALLY love it Bella! You're an awesome writer. I watch and read Naruto but I've never really been a Naruto person. I think that this is much better! ;D
     
  6. I like it so far but I would suggest proof reading I found myself not able to enjoy because I was becoming a critic of the simple mistakes
     
  7. ...uh ok thxs