Broken I live my life with devotion. I go through the motions but there's no magic potion to fix things that are broken it's a tragic lessons in the eye of a teen, there first love hates them And all his friends leave. Shes sleeping fine she's happy as can be, while he up at night hopelessly waiting praying he will get her back but never succeeds his heart bleeding, heart attack, Cherry bombs he's sitting in the black he's got no end to this track he has a dream he's prepared to end it all when in fact things are brightening up he just doesn't see it yet he gets out of bed knew light he realizes he can fight on he's in flight joyous upbringing it's a new him uprising after his horrid downfall he arises from his ashes brushes the dust off and moves passed he's a brand new man this is a victory god damn.
Ed's new song is so ****. Lyrics are awful and song so mediocre you forget it AS you're listening to it.
@Cast idk who it is either nor do I gaf... as for your song op you could use the word "he" less, imagery was good spelling errors etc. not so much but, next time post a final copy or an edited one otherwise expect to get hated on by trolls. Good on ya for having the balls to post here but like someone said above its a war game so not too many are going to give two 's Good luck Almost forgot your last line... If your life isn't what you hoped, you might want to read about karma. Things go wrong for a reason and posting g-d damn here has an effect even if no one can see it. Don't get me wrong I'm not preaching karma but if you look into it that might help you get a different perspective on life. Don't take my word for it though.. I'm a mess