My Poem; please read, emotional and about something serious.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Jan 20, 2013.

  1. I play music, write music, write poems, stories, etc.
     
  2. Wow that's amazing hulk, you sure are something :)
     
  3. I play video games, watch videogames, write about videogames, imagine about videogames, and talk about videogames.

    Boom!
     
  4. I attempt at songs, attempt stories, write some what good poems, KaW, etc.
     
  5. You guys...woah
    Me?...yeah, I'm just me 
     
  6. I'm not much honestly. I smash.
     
  7. I liked it you should go to the writers cafè I would love to see you there
     
  8. Yeah billoman might do!
     
  9. Agh never mind
     
  10. Yeah that confused me lol
     
  11. I loved the poem:cool:
     
  12. Thank you!

    By the way guys, I've posted one of my stories, A Changing Personality! Check it out. :)
     
  13. Poem is really good!ツthe only thing that seemed off was the repetiotion but having a melody in ir head does effect writting so…Good job
     
  14. Three month bump? I think so :D
     
  15. @_@ it was pretty good (jerk)