Well, I'm not quite sure how to teach someone... But as you get older, you'll get better grammar. And if you have auto correct, turn it on. It'll help.
Mhm i see thank you and again im sorry for my actions and if i put more stories plz tell me how to improve myself
Only put them on one thread. I recommend you make a thread titled: "My Compilations" or "Dreamy's Stories", that type of thing. That will make Feedback easier, and will reduce the clutter.