Mine.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Ahdragos (01), Jul 11, 2010.

  1. You shoulda finished it. IT WAS AMAZING!
     
  2. DAT WAS AMAZING
     
  3. It can be transformed into a song lol. Just give it some rap rhythm and speed and it's a song.
     
  4. Nicely done.
     
  5. I got the rhythm you were going for. It was truly awesome. Very very good. Hats off to you my friend.
     
  6. Thanks Bob, appreciate the compliment, because both of us know that I more than competent enough to write that. Your sarcasm and bitterness merely illustrate my accomplishment. Thank you.
     
  7. Lol. GO DIN DIN!! I thought your poem was beautiful
     
  8. Two thumbs up . One in the air the other my butt.

    Good job bro
     
  9. That was great dragos!
     
  10. Love it best poem eva
     
  11. I remember my first poem.
     
  12. I wish that wind
    carried away memories
    easily as a leaf
    Then I could stand
    outside
    raise my hands and
    close my eyes
    and be done with
    you
     
  13. This is a poem called fleas

    adam had em
     
  14. Fair enuf mbp5

    This one is called ENVY

    I bet Ron Jeremy
    Never has to say
    "excuse me"
    when he farts
    around a girl