Madness Unleashed - FEEDBACK AND CHAT

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Jun 28, 2011.

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  1. Nice! More!
     
    #41 Storallelite, Jul 1, 2011
  2. I'm confused! What does noone mean?
     
    #42 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  3. ****. You ne'er really said the environment...I was thinking a school environment, I should've known it would involve being kidnapped, hunted, something of that sort.
     
    #43 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  4. Feather, when was the last time I used one specific environment?
     
    #44 cheesemuffin, Jul 1, 2011
  5. Idk...but seriously what does noone mean?
     
    #45 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  6. Noone... It means "no one". That's it. That's all it means. Nobody
     
    #46 cheesemuffin, Jul 1, 2011
  7. That's not how you spell no one. The so called word "noone" isn't a real word at all.
     
    #47 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  8. But... You just shattered everything I ever learned in elementary school.


    *head explodes*
     
    #48 cheesemuffin, Jul 1, 2011
  9. Lol.
     
    #49 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  10. Great but gets confuzzling with all the people.
    -Bangs head on table-
     
    #50 Interrobang, Jul 1, 2011
  11. Great Job post more please!
     
    #51 *babygurl2112 (01), Jul 1, 2011
  12. ;) who were the three in the park. My character and then who else? I need to understand the others powers more I guess...
     
    #52 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  13. The three were...

    Melanie - controls water
    Ariel - pushes things away from her
    Stargorey - changes what people see
     
    #53 cheesemuffin, Jul 1, 2011
  14. Are you using my guy? Or did Feather pull you away?

    Just curious :?
     
    #54 Interrobang, Jul 1, 2011
  15. Sorry >.< who was your guy?
     
    #55 cheesemuffin, Jul 1, 2011
  16. Starlov, necromancer teleporter. Bio was a bit iffy. If you want I can change it. You should look at the sign up thread. :roll:
     
    #56 Interrobang, Jul 1, 2011
  17. Well, I can't exactly put him in if he can't use necromancy without teleporting, and he cant teleport without using necromancy...

    Please redo his powarZ >.<
    sorry
     
    #57 cheesemuffin, Jul 1, 2011
  18. Ugh...two names with star ;(
     
    #58 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  19. He can draw memories from others and these as a beam of plasma.

    I'm sorry if this is a rip of someone but I have no idea that someone has this power.
     
    #59 Interrobang, Jul 1, 2011
  20. I'm ok to change if that's too strong.
     
    #60 Interrobang, Jul 1, 2011
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