Madness Unleashed - FEEDBACK AND CHAT

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Jun 28, 2011.

  1. But that's the whole thing I do with my stories! I never let anyone know what's really going on'
     
  2. And it gets boring after a while. After being so confused, you lose interest. No point in reading if the plot is never explained.
     
  3. I think it's interesting, but many things going are on. This time I wasn't confused but you have been rather vague. I think you just need to give a little more detail to what's going on.