Madness Unleashed - FEEDBACK AND CHAT

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Jun 28, 2011.

  1. ༄That's what she said xD༄

    iZaln
     
  2. New Chapter.
    Feedback.
    You get the idea.
     
  3. Pretty nice, can't wait to see where it'll go. Nice work
     
  4. NUUU CUT OFF ENDING! Well not cut off but dramatic. Makes me wonder..
     
  5. Is the Arbiter exploding caused by my guy? Is it?
     
  6. That's for you to find out, and for me to know 
     
  7. ༄Actually Muff, that for you to type and us to read. Like now? Lol it was a cliff-hanger chapter. Darnnn.༄

    iZaln
     
  8. I see what you did there, Zaln

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    ^ I made a time machine ^
     
  9. Semi cliff hanger. >.> This one.
     
  10. *waits for feedback
     
  11. MUST. RESIST. URGE. TO SAY. NEW CHARACTER.

    Such a freaking epic idea... *goes into coma from too much stress on brain from resisting*
     
  12. I feel bad that I didn't help by making a character about now lol idc
     
  13. New chapter... I hope I get more than two people's feedback 
     
  14. The APM speaks using recordings. That particular recording was MJ. See what I did there?
     
  15. ༄Lol the eyeball is just like bumblebee from transformers ;P༄

    iZaln
     
  16. Zaln, I guess he got inspired from Bumblebee…