Made of Stone feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Fangedwolf, Oct 12, 2010.

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  1. But it's not even two pages long lol mayb a page of detailed chapters that explain alot and a cliffhanger to a sequel
     
    #101 german_idiot, Nov 28, 2010
  2. I like that.
     
    #102 Fangedwolf, Nov 28, 2010
  3. So maybe like two or three really detailed chapters then a cliffhanger. I already got one planned out:
     
    #103 Fangedwolf, Nov 28, 2010
  4. But I'm not tellin u nothin
     
    #104 Fangedwolf, Nov 28, 2010
  5. Since Snake is a great character do a series of storys on it Fang
     
    #105 kaw_admin, Nov 28, 2010
  6. Fine u jerk then I'm not gonna tell u how to make the worlds best reeses cups haha
     
    #106 german_idiot, Nov 28, 2010
  7. I like it and think you should continue without listening to everyones b****ing and moaning.
     
    #107 minicoop95, Nov 29, 2010
  8. Gonna try to post two chapters for next update!
     
    #108 Fangedwolf, Nov 30, 2010
  9. Two chapters plus a bonus villain view.
     
    #109 Fangedwolf, Dec 1, 2010
  10. Whens the update?
     
    #110 minicoop95, Dec 1, 2010
  11. ......where???
     
    #111 german_idiot, Dec 1, 2010
  12. Not yet.I'm informing you of the yet to come.
     
    #112 Fangedwolf, Dec 1, 2010
  13. Bump for new chapter
     
    #113 german_idiot, Dec 3, 2010
  14. I'm posting the chapters one at a time. How is it?
     
    #114 Fangedwolf, Dec 3, 2010
  15. Not bad man mayb describe the dungeon a little more and where the others r but other than that ur fine
     
    #115 german_idiot, Dec 3, 2010
  16. I said coliseum.
     
    #116 Fangedwolf, Dec 3, 2010
  17. But what part of the coliseum are they in????...............the dungeon part of course
     
    #117 german_idiot, Dec 3, 2010
  18. Great story so far!
     
    #118 Storallelite, Dec 3, 2010
  19. New chapter!
     
    #119 Fangedwolf, Dec 16, 2010
  20. What happened to cooper in all this? I thought he was down in the battle right by matea. Great chapters though
     
    #120 minicoop95, Dec 16, 2010
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