Made of Stone feedback

I never said you had to do as others say, just giving suggestions.

 

Okay
1) I'm writing 9 novels, 7 screenplays and a graphic novel. I'm good and don't wanna write yours
2) You can't kick me off the thread because I'm not posting profanity or spam
3) I'm giving you constrictive criticism you don't have to be so mean just cuz I'm telling you what you're doing wrong
4) if you can't put in the time to write a story don't be so surprised when people are saying you're too slow

 

 Yay!

 

Conq. Are you posting a chapter every day on here? Also, Fang has a life 

P.S. Fang, to fix your editing problem, write your chapter on notes. Then look it over and post it here .
Also, you're ending everything too abruptly. You need to work on your cliffhangers, your sentence structure, and your vocabulary. You arent using very interesting verbs or adjectives.

You have gotten better! 

 

Re: Made of hi

Hilo

 

Actually gloomi I've managed to write a chapter every day. I simply don't show my stories because I know they're ********

 

U could introduce Snake's parents before the story starts and introduce Snake

 

Lolwut 

 

Unwashed talking to Wolf

 

I was *

 

He already started writing so he can't go back and change it if he did that he may hav to start over from scratch

 

Idiot many authors do go back before creating a final

 

And further more Fangedwolf this story and character are just Great

 

If he's on iPod which he probly is he can't edit it and to start a new thread just to do one edit is wasteful he's put to much thinking into this to start over and do one thing and did it occur to u that he may not hav parents in the story