Idk. Sorry if I sound harsh but I have to be honest. I'm losing interest. I'm waiting too long for every chapter -.-
Speaking of waiting.... I have completed part 11 of Fading Fast!!!! I should be returning to my daily-chapter schedule, so anyone who wants to read Fading Fast, go ahead! *Not meant to take people away from this story, in case you thought so.
ARE YOU FRICKEN KIDDINg ME?! I TRY HARD TO POST A CHAPTER AT MOST EVERY WEEK, THEN YOU ALL COMPLAIN I'M TAKING TOO LONG!!!!! bUT WHEN I LOOK AT CHEESE'S THREAD? EVERYONE WELCOMES HIM BACK! THEY APPLAUD HIM! WHEN I POST A CHAPTER, A FEW DAYS LATER, YOU ALL COMPLAIN! IM SICK OF IT!!!!!
Because his story is getting somewhere and he posted a lot before. I like your story but there are too many cliffhangers and you're taking way too long to explain them especially with the waiting. I'll read it but here's my feedback. It's getting annoying and boring
Fang, it's a really good story! It's really fun to read, jst the parts are coming a tiny bit slow. Don't give up! Just try to make them a little faster. Noone is perfect, but everyone can improve. DO NOT GIVE UP ON YOUR STORY
Dude stop getting pissed at one review not everyone is gonna like it but its how u handle that criticism that can make u good or not
Fang, will a little mistake really put you down that far? She's giving you constructive advice! To make a story successful, you have to try to meet the readers' demands. They say less cliffhangers, do less cliffhangers, they say do it faster, you don't have to, but you can try! There's no need to react in this way! Ok, I think Im done yelling. Bye