Made of Stone feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Fangedwolf, Oct 12, 2010.

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  1. Need it edited
     
    #21 Fangedwolf, Oct 16, 2010
  2. No you don't. Just post it I'm tired of waiting 
     
    #22 Conqueress, Oct 16, 2010
  3. Yes I do
     
    #23 Fangedwolf, Oct 16, 2010
  4. Excellent. Let me just remind you Matea can only use telepathy when physically touching someone, you can get some very dramatic scenes with that if she's not around anyone to call for help.

    Otherwise great story. I just hope you'll explain everything later, I'm a little lost on what's happening
     
    #24 Conqueress, Oct 17, 2010
  5. That was awesome I really liked it!
     
    #25 *Tonks (01), Oct 17, 2010
  6. Conqueress u were very impatient! Lol
     
    #26 Fangedwolf, Oct 18, 2010
  7. I know haha. I'm known for that
     
    #27 Conqueress, Oct 18, 2010
  8. Good job cant wait for the next chapter
     
    #28 minicoop95, Oct 18, 2010
  9. Bump
     
    #29 minicoop95, Oct 19, 2010
  10. Bump
     
    #30 minicoop95, Oct 21, 2010
  11. New chapter will be out by Friday at most
     
    #31 Fangedwolf, Oct 21, 2010
  12. Sweet
     
    #32 minicoop95, Oct 21, 2010
  13. This isn't gonna get many comments, will it?
     
    #33 Fangedwolf, Oct 21, 2010
  14. Yeah once you keep going
     
    #34 Conqueress, Oct 21, 2010
  15. If u had the story up faster it would be a bigger thread
     
    #35 minicoop95, Oct 21, 2010
  16. Don't worry it's a great story just because no ones commenting here doesn't mean it's not getting read
     
    #36 german_idiot, Oct 21, 2010
  17. @minicoop.
    Well writing is hard u know. I do it, on an IPoD!
     
    #37 Fangedwolf, Oct 22, 2010
  18. Bump. How's new chapter?
     
    #38 Fangedwolf, Oct 22, 2010
  19. Excellent, as always
     
    #39 Conqueress, Oct 22, 2010
  20. Just to let you know the italics code is As you did then a slash between the first bracket and I at the end
     
    #40 Conqueress, Oct 22, 2010
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