Love's Destiny

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by no_lyn, Jan 25, 2014.

  1. Yeah, we can't properly process the story unless we know how hot Amanda is out of 10. Are Zach's friends gay or are they just prepubescent and don't like hot girls?
     
  2. Id say maybe be hot but shy? Or just different
     
  3. We're not mean, we're giving criticism to improve the story.