This story was supose to represent how i felt for the last couple of years,without telling the actual story,so they can't die at the end,sorry.
Bacon narwhale netulla if you had taken the time you would have realized that now because of the new forum layout fan fiction shows in at
It was a decent read, yes there were grammatical mistakes but they again this is not a résumé. Decent work OP. Must relate to something in RL that you have gone through, just a thought.
Not a bad story. Almost tommy and christa ish by thirsty merc. If you had added that: They ran towards each other to passionately embrace. But tripped over an unknown object, their ropes got tied around a tree and each others necks. After which they fell into a hole and were hung. But your ending is ok. May the Force be with you!