LoKaW Feedback - Both Versions

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So everyone's input is 1.25... But then I need more pizzaz, so that -25 and it's a little bit too drawn out so that's -25 so that's... 1/2 STARS! W00t!

 

Lol, cheese yours is just as awesome as feathers, feather has incorporated more elements, but u have made ur story a little more adventurous, I like urs both equally ^^ both amazing fan fictions!

 

Cheese, yours has more pizazz than feathers

 

Yea, but feather was more creative with making the actual parts of kaw a part of the story

 

So yea, both equally awesome ^.^ at least in my opinion

 

I think I'll post a little sneak peak later on...

THANKS, Tigris! You'll be in it soon! So will the Oracle, and Be — I've said too much!

 

Np, and POST THE SNEAK PEAK plzzz! Lol I cant wait for it >.<

 

I need to write it first! And it'll be in the middle of the post this time, so y'all will have to read the beginning this time. And after I post the sneak peak, I'll edit it so y'all will have a normal reading experience instead of having foreshadowing knowledge.

 

Lol dont edit it too drastically >.>

 

That sounds fun.

 

Here's what I'll do:

#1 Write Sneak Peak.

#2 Post Sneak Peak.

#3 Edit Sneak Peak in my writing app.

#4 Finish the top half of chapter and bottom half, with the Sneak Peak in the middle.

 

1) poor shifter0.0.
Come on lemme see a complete idiot of a charecter pweaaaaase?

 

2) Love it Feather- suspense building 

 

Well done guys!
They were both so great, but I especially loved the way that feather wrote his! :')

 

THANKS!

 

Any Idea when the you'll put some more up?

 

Yep. In a leetle bit.

 

I'll keep my eyes peeled.

 

Feather, you've got yourself some pizazz!


Castle code ftw!! xD