LoKaW Feedback - Both Versions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011.

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  1. -______- I didn't see this feedback thread...
     
    #61 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  2. Darn my noobiness :embarrassed:
     
    #62 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  3. You're in mine, too. You've had a minor appearance. Your big debut will come soon, though.
     
    #63 FeatherHunter, Dec 30, 2011
  4. How come cheese and feather are writing different versions of the same story?
     
    #64 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  5. Because they can
     
    #65 *iPimella (01), Dec 30, 2011
  6. Ok then...
     
    #66 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  7. ^We got bored and decided to have a friendly Writing War. That's all :3
     
    #67 cheesemuffin, Dec 30, 2011
  8. "Featherus Hunterio, Guardian of Fan Fiction"
    Glad to see Feather hasn't changed. xD
     
    #68 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  9. ^Wait... Your name... Your recognition of Feather's cockiness....

    EAGLE, IS THAT YOU?
     
    #69 cheesemuffin, Dec 30, 2011
  10. o_O It could be...
     
    #70 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  11. I have been on ff before...
     
    #71 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  12. you always make the same character bio
     
    #72 *iPimella (01), Dec 30, 2011
  13. Is it terrible?
     
    #73 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  14. Because my character bios are always crappy. xD
     
    #74 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  15. I put that Guardian of Fan Fic part to annoy d_blows. XD
     
    #75 FeatherHunter, Dec 30, 2011
  16. OMGoodness. Benny, who is so gracious, is gonna delete all posts not made by me and gonna delete my latest one so I can post the edited one! HOW AWESOME IS THAT?

    Please, if it's not an inconvenience, read the edited one. Lots more emotion, detail, description, and introductions. Y'all will love it!
     
    #76 FeatherHunter, Dec 30, 2011
  17. Not bad... Not bad at all...

    I just think it's a leetle bit too drawn out.
     
    #77 cheesemuffin, Dec 30, 2011
  18. It needs some pizazz. Other than that its fabulous.
     
    #78 Eagleking, Dec 30, 2011
  19. Feather ur story is great as usual, I love how ur turning this simple little game into this big saga. Lol the way u write it kinda reminds me of Lord of the Rings. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next part :3
     
    #79 *Tigris108 (01), Dec 30, 2011
  20. Better now
     
    #80 Storallelite, Dec 30, 2011
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