LoKaW Feedback - Both Versions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011.

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  1. It's 5:45 AM for me
     
    #361 FeatherHunter, May 24, 2012
  2. I must have read some stuff wrong sorry! Cut me some slack it's 3:00 in the morning lol.. But yea oooh it sounds soooo good :3 EEEP I can't wait!!! :D
     
    #362 *Tigris108 (01), May 24, 2012
  3. Got dammit
     
    #363 *Tigris108 (01), May 24, 2012
  4. Lol sorry I thought it didn't send the first time
     
    #364 *Tigris108 (01), May 24, 2012
  5. Lol
     
    #365 FeatherHunter, May 24, 2012
  6. Noob moment :3
     
    #366 *Tigris108 (01), May 24, 2012
  7. featherdumb knows all about noob moments
     
    #367 d_bo_assassin, May 24, 2012
  8. And so said Cheesemuffin, "let this thread rise again!"
     
    #368 cheesemuffin, Sep 18, 2012
  9. LMAO!!!!!! Dbo riding on shifter's back in the battle---- I almost fell out my chair in laughter.

    So am I dead or a prisoner now?
     
    #369 llIlI_LR-RIPPER_IllII, Sep 18, 2012
  10. Not a prisoner, not dead. Or are you?
     
    #370 cheesemuffin, Sep 18, 2012
  11. I think you've acheived a rather nice blend of mind numbing violence and humor.
     
    #371 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Sep 18, 2012
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    #372 cheesemuffin, Sep 18, 2012
  13. Lmao'ed (That a ****ing word?) @ D_Bo riding on shifter's back :lol:
     
    #373 Bonfifi, Sep 18, 2012
  14. More magic reading words! :D
     
    #374 Eagleking, Sep 18, 2012
  15. It's good, both of it. :) keep writing!
     
    #375 GD-LaserKing, Sep 19, 2012
  16. Good news slaves!
    New chapter incoming! ETA 1-3 hours!
     
    #376 cheesemuffin, Sep 19, 2012
  17. I'll be sleeping :(
     
    #377 Eagleking, Sep 19, 2012
  18. Wait for chapter?

    Or get enough sleep for school?

    Such a hard decision :(
     
    #378 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Sep 19, 2012
  19. Uploaded half an hour before schedule.

    SUCCESS!
     
    #379 cheesemuffin, Sep 19, 2012
  20. Can't think of saying anything constructive, other than it's a good part. No "Intelligent" feedback from me this time.
     
    #380 Bonfifi, Sep 19, 2012
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