LoKaW Feedback - Both Versions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011.

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  1. Lol stora
     
    #341 FeatherHunter, May 19, 2012
  2. New chapter.
    Get to it, slaves.
     
    #342 cheesemuffin, May 21, 2012
  3. Nice story cheese.
     
    #343 *PielordTy (01), May 21, 2012
  4. 2 hulks up
     
    #344 *IRONhulk (01), May 21, 2012
  5. I'm disgusted. I would never say "Oi!"
     
    #345 FeatherHunter, May 21, 2012
  6. Bad lazy cheese.

    Other than that, the fact that it disgusts feather makes me love it even more. x3
     
    #346 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 21, 2012
  7. The fact that you have no idea what I'm talking about and that you're making yourself look ignorant makes me love it even more!
     
    #347 FeatherHunter, May 21, 2012
  8. I'm not sure if you hate it or not, Feather... There's insightful philosophical statements and there are completely incomprehensible statements.

    I'm just sayin'
     
    #348 cheesemuffin, May 21, 2012
  9. Hooray
     
    #349 Eagleking, May 21, 2012
  10. Yay. Feather DOES hate me.
     
    #350 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 21, 2012
  11. I don't hate anyone. Don't put words on my... Thumbs?
     
    #351 FeatherHunter, May 21, 2012
  12. ._. I guess I have to try harder then. Sigh.
     
    #352 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 21, 2012
  13. I loved the original revolution story, by far the best thing I ever read in fan fic.
     
    #353 IllIll_Jay_IllIll, May 22, 2012
  14. Same here.
     
    #354 Eagleking, May 22, 2012
  15. Can't find Feather's Version
     
    #355 Eaglestar, May 23, 2012
  16. I like your version better though cheese.
     
    #356 Eaglestar, May 23, 2012
  17. I'm rewriting mine. I didn't establish a hard outline, which is a serious mistake. Hence the rewrite.
     
    #357 FeatherHunter, May 23, 2012
  18. I love the story summary! Thank u soo much for putting me in it! That was so nice of u ^.^ but yea the story sounds absolutely fantastic so far, I love the end part where I sound "uninterested" mysteriously.. Dun dun dun! Lol can't wait for the full rewrite to come out! (psssttt.. Add a twist in the plooot :3)
     
    #358 *Tigris108 (01), May 24, 2012
  19. Tigris. That's stora who is seemingly uninterested but can't hide that she is.

    They're coming for you lol.

    You exit the story indefinitely when the guards tell me that they're coming for you, Tigris, Sultan of Tige. Not me. You.

    Stora enters after my run in with a female mod who I've got the most especial plans for ;)
     
    #359 FeatherHunter, May 24, 2012
  20. Hehe lol sorry I must have read some things wrong  cut me some slack it's like 3:00 in the morning! But oooh I love it so far :3
     
    #360 *Tigris108 (01), May 24, 2012
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