LoKaW Feedback - Both Versions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011.

  1. /me isn't sure if player pics are still allowed
     
  2. I don't think so
     
  3. My eyes and back ache, my head hurts, and I want to sleep...

    YOU ALL KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS! NEW CHAPTER INCOMING!
     
  4. New chapter?








    READY THE SAM MISSLES!
     
  5. So when you ache and you're tired, you...

    Write about KaW? o.ô
     
  6. That Makes sense fruit...
     
  7. Wrong.

    It monkeys the house-flavored avocado, but only on Thursdays.
     
  8. Rofl.




    Oh yeah, th post!
     
  9. I, the current master of chapter delays, have posted! It's only five days late, quit whining.
     
  10. Only?! Grr.
    (And the abbreviation in the note was
    a good touch. Made me lol)
     
  11. I've only read Cheese's version but it's awesome. :D
     
  12. Eclipse, I don't believe you've met me and my writing habits. Five days is nothing for me.
     
  13. Damn, that was good. I forgot how good your stories were, Cheese.
     
  14. Winters! I missed you! 
     
  15. I haven't. But still xP
     
  16. Story time! :D
     
  17. Absolutely amusing as always. I'm glad to see the addition of wrath and dbo in the story. Tho I am still awaiting my appearance as the beauteous heroine. Lol
     
  18. It would appear as though Abyssus was on FanFiction recently...

    This is a sign from the Admin! I MUST WRITE TODAY!