LoKaW Feedback - Both Versions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011.

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  1. Pfft, I eat those for breakfast!
     
    #221 cheesemuffin, Mar 5, 2012
  2. o.o" I wonder how cesium reacts with saliva and stomach acid...
     
    #222 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Mar 5, 2012
  3. Finally did it! I am back into writing!

    WOOOOO
     
    #223 cheesemuffin, Mar 6, 2012
  4. :D

    Lemme go read it
     
    #224 Bonfifi, Mar 6, 2012
  5. I may or may not actually finish it!
     
    #225 cheesemuffin, Mar 6, 2012
  6. UHMAIGAWSH. Not finish it?! Preposterous!

    Very good chapter. I know who Teja is (was), but for newer players maybe you should've used someone newer, like Red-Star. I'm fine with it though lol. Shifter is a fat troll (I say that with the best of intentions) and an anti-admin idea of shifter kind of made me laugh.





    Overall, :D
     
    #226 Bonfifi, Mar 6, 2012
  7. Yeah, what exactly happened to Teja?

    Name change, quit?
     
    #227 cheesemuffin, Mar 6, 2012
  8. I heard his GF reset his account after he spent too much time on KaW.
     
    #228 Bonfifi, Mar 6, 2012
  9. I just read your version cheese. Update nao!
     
    #229 *Titi121yippy (01), Mar 6, 2012
  10. Lol, on your own time but Swabia and devil each need a special part (in my opinion)
     
    #230 *Titi121yippy (01), Mar 6, 2012
  11. Finish or die.
    A death by my cesium/copernicium waffles.
    Since, you know, I want to know how it reacts with saliva and/or stomach acid.
     
    #231 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Mar 6, 2012
  12. Suspense! keep writing!
     
    #232 Storallelite, Mar 7, 2012
  13. Yes. He agrees, see.


    Finish or take cesium to the mouth.
     
    #233 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Mar 7, 2012
  14. Hey, I'ma let you finish, but Stora's a girl.
     
    #234 cheesemuffin, Mar 7, 2012
  15. Yeah...
    Maybe I should've chosen a more girly username...like lyn or something...
     
    #235 Storallelite, Mar 7, 2012
  16. ^You don't need a "girly" username to be considered a girl. Why does it even matter?

    I myself have been mistaken for a girl a few times xD
     
    #236 cheesemuffin, Mar 8, 2012
  17. Fine. She*

    And for the record, girly names aren't everything. Just to be contradictary, I've chosen non-girly names in the past. :D
     
    #237 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Mar 8, 2012
  18. The point is so people online don't mistake for a guy...
    You don't know how many times it's happened -sigh-
     
    #238 Storallelite, Mar 8, 2012
  19. Cheese isn't a girl 0.0
     
    #239 *IRONhulk (01), Mar 8, 2012
  20. No, I'm not :I
     
    #240 cheesemuffin, Mar 8, 2012
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