linked - Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Oct 11, 2011.

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  1. 1st. I just read it, DON'T JUDGE MEH :(

    2nd. Good chapter. Very well detailed and EPIC FLUFFEH :)

    3rd. Who is Alan? Maybe I missed the last chapter
     
    #121 Bonfifi, Nov 5, 2011
  2. Alan is the main character's best friend.
     
    #122 cheesemuffin, Nov 5, 2011
  3. OOOOHHHHHH!


    His name is Allen, he was my sign-up
     
    #123 Bonfifi, Nov 5, 2011
  4. 



     
    #124 *iPimella (01), Nov 6, 2011
  5. Still no actual feedback.

    I might just drop the story if nobody's reading. -.-
     
    #125 cheesemuffin, Nov 6, 2011
  6. EVERYONE is reading it, it's just that I'm not very good at giving feedback, or it's just that your story is so good it doesn't need feedback.... :)
     
    #126 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 6, 2011
  7. I'm not reading it...
    Lol If that helps
    (Actually I'm not reading anyones stories right now due to my very kind teachers who have graciously given me piles of work. Otherwise I would be leaving feedback and putting together my new story.)

    Don't cut it cheese or I'll never get around to reading it!(Once I get this pile of work done)
     
    #127 Storallelite, Nov 6, 2011
  8. I would feedback, I just suck at feedbacking >.<
     
    #128 Bonfifi, Nov 7, 2011
  9. Well, I've just sent a slightly edited version to FanFiction.net.

    As of 15 minutes ago, 10 views :3
     
    #129 cheesemuffin, Nov 7, 2011
  10. I LIKE IT. WRITE MORE o_o
     
    #130 Bremen, Nov 10, 2011
  11. A little more in depth: i do enjoy the open endings. It leaves alot more room to expand, and to come back and play with later.
     
    #131 Bremen, Nov 10, 2011
  12. New chapter. Wooooo...
     
    #132 cheesemuffin, Nov 30, 2011
  13. You have to post this on GaW!!!
     
    #133 RenamedPhoenix, Dec 4, 2011
  14. Why?
     
    #134 cheesemuffin, Dec 5, 2011
  15. It's amazing!
     
    #135 RenamedPhoenix, Dec 18, 2011
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