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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Oct 11, 2011.

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    So much win :~]
     
    #81 Bonfifi, Oct 17, 2011
  2. Moar?
     
    #82 matzah, Oct 17, 2011
  3. I like the new chapter! can't wait to find out what happens next! (I really should have bought that time machine)
     
    #83 Renatum, Oct 17, 2011
  4. So little feedback...
     
    #84 cheesemuffin, Oct 17, 2011
  5. Okay...

    I LOVE the story. I can't wait 'till other sign-up characters start appearing.
    The plot is interesting and it leaves me speculating about what'll happen next.
    Your grammar is awesome and...

    GIVE me MOOOAAAAR!!

    Serious mixed with MOAR.

    Satisfied? ;)
     
    #85 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Oct 17, 2011
  6. Yar.

    I
     
    #86 cheesemuffin, Oct 17, 2011
  7. Bump in preparation for a new chapter (finally)
     
    #87 cheesemuffin, Oct 27, 2011
  8. The Deaths serve the king. The Prince of Death towers over the two kings, among the Titans , who rule over all. But the Titans serve the Light and Dark.

    What? I didn't say nothin'
     
    #88 cheesemuffin, Oct 27, 2011
  9. ^Awww nobody's even noticed my fancy spoiler poem :(

    Anyway, I'm almost done with the chapter. You'd better read it.
     
    #89 cheesemuffin, Oct 27, 2011
  10. Okay :)
     
    #90 *MAILSTROM (02), Oct 27, 2011
  11. 1) I can't believe nobody's shown a sign of caring :(

    2) I 'm working on it! I have... 6 sentences!
     
    #91 cheesemuffin, Oct 28, 2011
  12. YAYZ >:D
     
    #92 Bonfifi, Oct 28, 2011
  13. U know I care
     
    #93 matzah, Oct 28, 2011
  14. That was a poem? I had no idea... Oh and you're right, I don't care. Lol jk jk
     
    #94 *ROAPopTarts (01), Oct 28, 2011
  15. Chapter's ready.

    It's ****, though. Didn't put any effort in it at all.
     
    #95 cheesemuffin, Oct 28, 2011
  16. Ya it's eh
     
    #96 matzah, Oct 28, 2011
  17. I LOVE YOU.
    It was awesome, I don't care what you say, it was AWESOME!
     
    #97 RenamedPhoenix, Oct 28, 2011
  18. /me: *noms chapter* It was yummy...
     
    #98 Renatum, Oct 28, 2011
  19. UHMAYGAWUSH THT WUZ 1337 : D
     
    #99 Bonfifi, Oct 28, 2011
  20. 1337...
    "Leet", the internet number "alphabet" that uses numbers as letters, like: 4-A 0-O 7-T 5-S 1-l 3-E 6-b/8-B...

    You just used it as an adjective...?
     
    #100 RenamedPhoenix, Oct 28, 2011
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