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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Oct 11, 2011.

  1. WRITE MOAR happy
     
  2. Ugh...

    *hand flails over phone*

    ...And then Rastamus and death Sinai sown wosqk helene ddsbw bowmen resonated throat Baka el wow spa bagel.

    There's the next chapter :3
     
  3. ...

    I LUV IT
     
  4. m.o.r.e (space) n.o.w.
     
  5. MOAR NAO








    Excuse me, master. A sammich, sir? O_O
     
  6. I apologize for the delay, I've gone full Minecraft this weekend.

    I've begun writing segment 4.

    REJOICE, MY SLAV- Fellow readers!
     
  7. Thanks cheese, for your writing brings me life!!!
     
  8. Yep, I am a piece of bread after all, I don't have much entertainment.
     
  9. No need for stress, sir. I am your slaves. Sammich? O_O
     
  10. *Noms sandwich*

    Thanks. Chapter's almost done.
     
  11. It better be amazing and not as short as your other chapters
     
  12. It's short, but it's good.
     
  13. Yay! I've been planning out my first full-length story, but I'm catching Cheese syndrome
     
  14. The cure for cheese syndrome
    Is taking a nap. Trust me, it works.
     
  15. Or, rather,

    Trust me, I'm a doctor
     
  16. K'Gul - the Loyal Death
    Rastamus - the Rasta Death
    Síchel - the Scout Death

    I won't say about their leader.

    Hehe
     
  17. The only way to make it better is to

























    Write MOAR!!!!!
    Plz
    I beg
     
  18. I think I just **** mah pants