Nobody knows how silence feels, How the harshest quiets pierce the air The silence is like a dagger Gracefully tearing apart the mind. For there is nobody to speak with But your mind speaks to you A recipe for madness -Cheesemuffin
It's an awesome story and the ending was really exciting Your language and grammar are excellent and I haven't found any mistakes yet Keep up the good work
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