G-d... Making 5 threads in a week that you ask personally to die, and that everyone try's to help you... But still... All of that in a Forum Topic that is meant for people who won't post wantonly...
forget it god didn't make me for stories so I guess that's why Im horrible at making stories I should of known no person understand my writing
Well then. Maybe you should slow down a few kilos before you post a thread. Write it on paper and edit it five times. Read more books. And not crappy books... Read some good books that ACTUALLY have no pictures, and have at least 300 pages. Read old books. Edgar Allan Poe, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle... Pretty much anything before 2000 that has no pictures, small print, and 300 pages plus will help you. Also. Don't post a new thread the second you have an idea. For a start, when all your threads are compiled, start anew, and post your stories ONLY on that thread, so that people who don't want to read it won't have to, and won't write criticism that will make you want to commit suicide. /Endrant Plus. If you are 13 plus... That would help. Well... Only if you're like me, or anyone else here that's a Young Teen.
Just read what I said and accept it. Are you below 13? If so... You have almost no hope... Also... LISTEN to what is said and read those books. Believe me, you can find something interesting.
Okay, no. I don't care how much I hurt your feelings. What you need to do is get out. And that might sound mean, but I'm serious. This isn't a happy go lucky writing app. This is a war app. That means that we aren't nice and helpful and sunshiny. I don't care if you admit defeat. I don't care how many times you admit defeat. If you suck, leave and find a community where you can actually improve. If you feel bullied and criticized, and can't accept criticism graciously, grow up. Age is not an excuse. If you're 16, and you land a job, do they tell you it's okay when you permanently stain all of the white clothing, because you're 'just 16?' Nope. Same concept. We don't care how old you are, if your grammar's not good, your story's not good. And if your story's not good, you need to try to either make it better or don't write at all.
Don't listen to him... Listen to this. You are 11? Good. Then you have hope. If you start reading books now, and push yourself, you might be a lil bit like me when you're older. Ever heard of the VideoGame Halo? Want to find a good book in the criteria that I told you? Check up the series called Halo. It's a Sci-Fi novel that will give you the vocabulary that you want. I read one of the books when I was twelve, called The Fall of Reach. It's around 300 pages, really small print, smells like an old man sneezed on it, and I understood barely half the words. But I still read it, and I enjoyed it. You should do the same. Good luck. When I said you have no hope... It meant if you were below 13... But it only meant that you have no hope to post a good story currently. You still have hope for posting good stories when you're older. Do you understand this and accept it? Search the books up, they're awesome, and have lost of action. Action that's way more intense, awesome, and violent than books these days Good luck!