Legend of KaW - Feather's Version (Feedback)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, May 26, 2012.

  1. Redundancy, Feather. You called him/her a ***** twice.
     
  2. I called bb-gun a ***** and xmind a *****. And I forgot to call blue-killer a *****. *****.
     
  3. bb-gun doesn't like me because she is trying to force me to apologize to Vulken_HeStan, which would be dumb. I meant what I said to him so why would I say sorry.
     
  4. Chill dude...
     
  5. I'm chill. It's just she is going to appear several times and the story and each time her torturer is going to hurt her bad. Then I can sleep peacfully 
     
  6. That could be phrased better, because it's a question with a period at the end.

    Feather, calm your ass down. Just chill. Explain to me why you LIKE the clan.
     
  7. Forget the chill thing... We posted at the same time :|
     
  8. And if you don't like the clan, which you obviously don't, leave, which you've already done.
     
  9. Join a cool clan
     
  10. I DIDN'T LEAVE. BB-GUN, THAT *****, DROPPED ME!
     
  11. Her name totally sounds like a dudes...
     
  12. Farm her then
     
  13. I'm not evil candi, it really hurts when you say that

    Really I'm not evil Just a bit...hmm...
     
  14. Storallelite... Are you evil? Or are you good?

    OR ARE YOU STRUGGLING WITH RIGHT AND WRONG?!
     
  15. Uhhh...I'm talking about me...not my character....
     
  16. I know 
     
  17. Then don't worry because I definitely know my rights and wrongs