What are you talking about? The story will go on for several chapters. It might span books, if I think it will be successful.
@ Everyone who has posted or read LoKaW I made this in the hard outline for several story arcs, but I was thinking GTV (Greeds Thorned Vines) was already detective and stuff, so I bailed on one of my story arcs because I thought GTV would be coming out soon around the time I wrote the hard outline. Anyway, one of the genres I'm incorporating into the story is mystery as you all know. I made a decision to incorporate a story arc having to do with Truth and Lies, which I trashed. But I brought it back, and I'm hoping that everyone will like it. What does this have to do with GTV, you're wondering? Well, whenever I read two detective stories at the same time, I usually compare them. But be warned, mystery and "Who did what" is only a portion of the overall story. Happy Reading, - FεατηεrΗμnτεr P.S - I'll be posting Part Two as soon as I finish writing it. P.S.S - Truth and Lies began in Chapter One, Part One, I just forgot to make the announcement.
I guess I didn't really organize what I was trying to say coherently... Basically, I have a story arc I trashed, but revived, known as Truth and Lies. Truth and Lies will be one of the themes of this book. Truth and Lies is centered around mystery and detection, which GTV is centered around, and I don't want anyone comparing, or I'm afraid of people comparing, my mystery element that I'm incorporating into my story, to yours, Stora. And a story arc is like a series of events in a book. So Truth and Lies will be in LoKaW, and the readers will have to determine who is responsible for certain things and possible motives for certain characters actions. For example, Stora, your motive for the upcoming part of Chapter One. Or do you, Stora, really not know her? Hmmmm... Just something to think about.
I don't know if that has ever been the strongest character introduction, but I had fun writing it. Until the end. It was a challenge getting it right. I'm still not happy with the end result I got for this part, but hey, not everything can be perfect. Anyone have any theories or speculations on what is going on with Stora and Pimella?
CONSPIRACY. I TOLD you guys that Stora was evil. xP The last two or three paragraphs were weak, Feather. The rest was spectacular.
@EagleKing We shall mourn the death of slippers... Thanks for the feedback @Candi I thought they were, too, Candi. I love your use of adjectives. But do you have any speculations about how he heard Pimella's voice, yet her lips didn't move. Maybe he was hallucinating... Maybe Stora drugged him...? Nice use if adjectives btw. Oh and, maybe Stora isn't evil? MAYBE Pimella drugged him!? @Everyone Thank you so much for the positive feedback! It makes me wanna write even better
Interesting...Though I'm surprised by how easily Stora agreed to help Feather. And Feather's lack of suspicion throughout the chapter. Normally people would ignore each other but...But I'm guessing Stora isn't normal lol
No, no. I don't mean character Stora, I mean Stora. Anyways, you mentioned my use of adjectives twice.