Legend of KaW - Feather's Version (Feedback)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, May 26, 2012.

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  1. Lolol ;)
     
    #61 FeatherHunter, May 31, 2012
  2. Cant tell I'f youre laughing with or at me... So I shall sing. Ra ra Rasputin.....
     
    #62 *IRONhulk (01), May 31, 2012
  3. I thought there was an update... -.-
     
    #63 Eagleking, May 31, 2012
  4. There is. The post before rally
     
    #64 FeatherHunter, May 31, 2012
  5. I'm saying that you're not Tolkien.

    In his instance, the writing is good, fitting the story well. In this, there's too much of it. It's like putting Shakespearean text over a story about the future.
     
    #65 cheesemuffin, May 31, 2012
  6. I have no idea what you're talking about. Everyone else thinks the story is wonderful.
     
    #66 FeatherHunter, May 31, 2012
  7. Yup
     
    #67 Eagleking, May 31, 2012
  8. Arrogance, Feather. Arrogance.

    I kind of get what cheese is saying...
     
    #68 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 31, 2012
  9. What do you mean arrogance?
     
    #69 FeatherHunter, May 31, 2012
  10. Nah, not arrogance. Maybe assumptions…
     
    #70 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 31, 2012
  11. W/e.
     
    #71 FeatherHunter, Jun 1, 2012
  12. Not bad. Pretty good. Not exactly what to say ATM to make it better. Maybe I'll reread it later.
     
    #72 Storallelite, Jun 1, 2012
  13. Thanks :D
     
    #73 FeatherHunter, Jun 1, 2012
  14. Jay, idk y u r getting so much hate on chapter 2. I LOVE IT. the entire set up of the story, character development, details, everything is astounding. Keep it up!
     
    #74 *Tigris108 (01), Jun 1, 2012
  15. Chapter One, Part One Tigris. I don't know why either...
     
    #75 FeatherHunter, Jun 1, 2012
  16. Didnt make sense when i read it but i was tired then>.> ill reread it today
     
    #76 *Rangoth (01), Jun 1, 2012
  17. Ahhh. I'm having fun writing about someone who MIGHT be the real stora... Hahahahaha.
     
    #77 FeatherHunter, Jun 1, 2012
  18. I don't get it... o_O
     
    #78 Eagleking, Jun 1, 2012
  19. Lol I'm not like that in RL. I tend to dream up fantasies up I what I might wish I was like.
     
    #79 Storallelite, Jun 1, 2012
  20. I hope thts not the ending.. it could keep going for 3 more chapters
     
    #80 *-IRONDAGER- (01), Jun 3, 2012
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