Any errors, please notify me. My app freaked out and spaced every word out and deleted “” and - – —so I had to retype most of it and and those back in, et cetera. That's why I split it into two parts and it's short -_-
You're jealous because all you can think of is fanfiction and roleplay. In Pimella's last line, you skipped a word. Nothing major though, I liked it.
Sorry about that Bright. I wish I'd had more time to write this one... @...Whatever your name is, get off my thread. If you post again, I will notify the mods. If you read the forum rules, noob, you'll know that I'm allowed to ban you from a thread that I own. So leave and don't post again.
For profanity, obscene behavior, or spam. Spam applies. Minor little edits. Nothing huge that I noticed.
I like the cliffhanger. :L But at the same time, it's pissing me off. It's still strange, really. I feel like the mirror thing wasn't the most original way to get Feather to realize -whatever-. But yeah.
Maybe Feather is going crazy? Maybe Feather is developing another personality? I'm notorious for having my characters develop those. Maybe the four words have more meaning than we are able to understand. Any speculations?
MPD is a strange yet wonderful thing. Especially when you write. No speculations, really. Just curiousity. I've been thinking about it, but there's nothing that really seems to fit.
I just don't like it because everyone is so freaking whimsical. I mean, it's nice and all, but it just bugs me how there's LoTR-speak everywhere! Also, the reason I've been kinda away lately is because I've been spending obscene amounts of time on a Minecraft server, being an Architect rank player (one of the best builders on the server), helping noobs and working to Mod.
Umm, LoTR? Do you mean Lord of the Rings? I've never read nor seen any of the LoTR books, so I apologize that it might resemble it.
Gasp! Feather hasn't read or seen lotr Anyway nearly crapped a brick when I saw two new posts disappointed to find one of them wasn't a story but it's good so far!