Legend of KaW - Feather's Version (Feedback)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, May 26, 2012.

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  1. Iron like Iron like
     
    #201 *IRONhulk (01), Jun 12, 2012
  2. Love it.
     
    #202 Eagleking, Jun 12, 2012
  3. Feather don't report me
    The grammar and spelling was fine but I didn't like the plot and story line at all
     
    #203 CHAOS_ASSASSIN, Jun 12, 2012
  4. I thought I told you not to post?
     
    #204 FeatherHunter, Jun 12, 2012
  5. Feather did he spam or be profane? Only way u can really force him to leave
     
    #205 *IRONhulk (01), Jun 12, 2012
  6. I know the rules, Iron.
     
    #206 FeatherHunter, Jun 12, 2012
  7. I could report u too if I wanted konstrikal, u bypassed on my wall twice :|

    Good story feather btw
     
    #207 etak, Jun 12, 2012
  8. Thank you.
     
    #208 FeatherHunter, Jun 12, 2012
  9. I know u do just checking
     
    #209 *IRONhulk (01), Jun 12, 2012
  10. bump
     
    #210 FeatherHunter, Jun 15, 2012
  11. Someone please shoot the people who keep posting on the story thread.

    If you want to shower Feather in praise, do it here.
     
    #211 Winters, Jun 21, 2012
  12. I wouldn't shoot them... But I'm definitely angry.
     
    #212 FeatherHunter, Jun 21, 2012
  13. Is it wrong to say MOAR!?
     
    #213 *IRONhulk (01), Jun 22, 2012
  14. Why does Feather have so many ladies? o_O
     
    #214 Eagleking, Jun 22, 2012
  15. FEATHER SORRY I WAS GONE FOR SO LONG D:, but anyways, anytime i read ur story I can't imagine it getting better, but it does. I am intrigued and stimulated literature-wise by every paragraph in LoKaW. Keep it up! :D
     
    #215 *Tigris108 (01), Jun 23, 2012
  16. Thanks Tigris!!!! I appreciate it1 :)

    ...Lady Marian will be in part one of Chapter Two.

    FYI: She will be of dark-colored descent.

    I chose her for this cuz she likes poetry... Originally it was for Tigris... which it can still be maybe... I don't know... Conflict of outline lol.
     
    #216 FeatherHunter, Jun 24, 2012
  17. Basically she's black?
     
    #217 Eagleking, Jun 24, 2012
  18. I'll tell you in a little bit.
     
    #218 FeatherHunter, Jun 24, 2012
  19. Updated :)
     
    #219 FeatherHunter, Jun 26, 2012
  20. Wtf?
     
    #220 *IRONhulk (01), Jun 26, 2012
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