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There is no such thing as "rating correctly" But there is such thing as good grammar, which is something you lack.
,,, *you is the only thing wrong in that sentence. Please learn the difference between grammar and spelling before trying to diss my friend. Thanks.
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yes. that would be nice. have KC get wounded or something. a bit of a challenge for her to have to overcome. it maybe put the cops guess duty on her, so she has to deal with withdrawal for a while so they don't catch her. or at least sneak away. idk. a bit if a twist instead of her just walking up, killing easily, an walking away.
She has to run away because the cops are onto her, but at the same time she must fulfil the killer inside…
Nicely isn't grammatically correct. Here are some words that are I kindly told you to leave I respectfully asked you to leave Nicely is like ain't. It originally wasn't a word, but all the three year olds in the world started using it and they decided to add the word. I laugh when people try to correct me, this one time I spelled grammar <-- like that, then some noob said "lol u idiot grammer is spelled with er not ar." That, is what you are doing, vas.
yeah. and you know what else wasnt an original word? "you". it was "thee" in original English. But now, it is a word used by everyone. it has been adopted into English. same as nicely. now sit down.
Nicely is a word. It is grammatically correct. Please learn the current English language before trying to correct me.