KaW Chronicles Short Stories

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Feb 14, 2011.

  1. Kk ill b workin on it now
     
  2. Kk ill b workin on it now
     
  3. Pls gloomi ;)
     
  4. Its not exactly a short story...more like a paragraph. I hope it's ok. If u want me to write more just ask :)


    Lynet:
    I watched sadly as all the other children walked away from the village towards a nearby lake.
    They hadn't bothered inviting me.
    "LYNET!" my aunts voice yelled from the home where I lived.
    I raced into the house only stoping to glance back once at the other children. I noticed a few of them pointing at me and giggling.
    I felt my face grow hot.
    What had they found out about me to laugh at this time?
    The parents and elders didn't bother trying to stop them.
    Even mom and dad weren't around to stop them.
    They teased me about my looks and how I acted older than I was.
    I ran into the kitchen where my aunt was. She didn't look anything like me but we were related.
    She had a smile on but it slipped when she saw my face.
    "Now Lynet, I told you to ignore those children. They don't understand what you are." she said with a sigh.
    I was confused by what she said. It was like I wasn't human...
    "You'll understand when you're older." my aunt said seeing my expression. "Now help me cook dinner."
    I grinned and ran out to get water for my aunt.
     
  5. So u don't know ur not human in that story
    (I don't mean to b pushy but could u right a paragraph or two more?)
     
  6. Yup, ok I'll see what I can think up...
     
  7. WHOAAAAAAAA... AWESOME short story!
    I'm gonna use it in my fanfic if (and give credit to you of course) its ok with you.
     
  8. I'll start writing and give it a shot. Good way to get some opinions.
     
  9. Should turn that into a full story
     
  10. Thx Chi
    @ Star
    yeah it is a good way.
    @ Ordo
    I still want u to write the story
     
  11. Ill try work more on it tonught
     
  12. Tonight* hate these vertical keyboards T-T
     
  13. @ Feather: Pls what? I cannot stand that name. It is pure bile in the back of my throat
     
  14. But I have to use that name plzzzzzzzz
     
  15. I put an hr into it tonight ill do more tomorrow... I umm im a good speller but i used a few irrefular words... help me out with a few things? How do you spell
    -bearings
    -seperating
    -aparently
    -orgion
    How would i write a girl scream? Eeek?
    And italics are
    - example right?