iZaln iEnterprises™ -Writing iEndorsements-

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Sep 11, 2010.

  1. Well that's my forum signature. It's become second nature. Been doing that since Nov-Dec 2009. It's either "iZ" or "iZaln" as my signature. :D

    iZaln
     
  2. Doom Assassin - Book 1
    The flame eternal
    Chapter 1
    Book 1-The flame eternal
    Sam was not just a normal 15 year old. He had extrordinary powers that were beyond ordinary. He worked for an assassin company, known as the Flame.
    He was on a job to assassinate Herzed, the king of the eastern territory.


    U like? 
     
  3. Nice. But isn't the whole set up a little to complicated? It's a bit hard to follow IMO, but that's me. Otherwise interesting. I have a soft spot for assassin stories lol. I've written my own. I enjoy the Assassin's Creed stuff as well... Ah WTF am I spewing on about lmao. Sweetness man.

    iZ
     
  4. It is a bit complicated. I will modify it.
     
  5. Doom Assassin - Book 1
    The flame eternal
    Chapter 1
    Book 1-The flame eternal
    Sam was not just a normal 15 year old. He had powers that were beyond ordinary. He worked for an assassin company, known as the Flame.
    They charged 1000 rupees to Assassinate anybody. Because of Sam, this buisness was very popular.


    There. 
     
  6. Nice as ice. Or hot as fire...

    iZ
     
  7. WOAH. Epic!!! I double posted but changed the 2nd!! Lol
     


  8. iZaln
     
  9. K I'm gonna keep goin.
    Doom Assassin - Book 1
    The flame eternal
    Chapter 1
    Book 1-The flame eternal
    Sam was not just a normal 15 year old. He had powers that were beyond ordinary. He worked for an assassin company, known as the Flame.
    They charged 1000 rupees to Assassinate anybody. Because of Sam, this buisness was very popular.
    Sam had just finished a job to Assassinate the evil warlord Zaetakeria, and succeeded easily. He lied in bed, staring up at the ceiling, when suddenly, he heard a rustling in the bushes by his house. He wandered outside to investigate, and right as he peeked into a bush, a cold hand grabbed him from behind and he was clubbed on the head.
     
  10. Good hook(er )!

    iZ
     
  11. Thanks! I don't really know what a cluhb!! is doin in an assassin story though.. It should be more like a knife or shumthin. Lol


    -The assassin
     
  12. K I'm gonna keep goin.
    Doom Assassin - Book 1
    The flame eternal
    Chapter 1
    Book 1-The flame eternal
    Sam was not just a normal 15 year old. He had powers that were beyond ordinary. He worked for an assassin company, known as the Flame.
    They charged 1000 rupees to Assassinate anybody. Because of Sam, this buisness was very popular.
    Sam had just finished a job to Assassinate the evil warlord Zaetakeria, and succeeded easily. He lied in bed, staring up at the ceiling, when suddenly, he heard a rustling in the bushes by his house. He wandered outside to investigate, and right as he peeked into a bush, a cold hand grabbed him from behind and he was clubbed on the head.


    Chapter 2
    When Sam woke up, he was lying on a cold, rock, floor. A chain was on his leg, but he blasted it and it fell with a clatter to the ground. He saw he was inside a cage. He tried to blast his way out, but the bars seemed to be made of a indestrictible substance. Sam took a closer look at the ceiling, and saw a vent about 20 feet above him. He jumped up, and blasted the vent to pieces. He floated inside. He expected to see a tunnel, but what he saw was far more than what he thought.
     
  13. I will finish off the chapter and go to bed.
    K I'm gonna keep goin.
    Doom Assassin - Book 1
    The flame eternal
    Chapter 1
    Book 1-The flame eternal
    Sam was not just a normal 15 year old. He had powers that were beyond ordinary. He worked for an assassin company, known as the Flame.
    They charged 1000 rupees to Assassinate anybody. Because of Sam, this buisness was very popular.
    Sam had just finished a job to Assassinate the evil warlord Zaetakeria, and succeeded easily. He lied in bed, staring up at the ceiling, when suddenly, he heard a rustling in the bushes by his house. He wandered outside to investigate, and right as he peeked into a bush, a cold hand grabbed him from behind and he was clubbed on the head.


    Chapter 2
    When Sam woke up, he was lying on a cold, rock, floor. A chain was on his leg, but he blasted it and it fell with a clatter to the ground. He saw he was inside a cage. He tried to blast his way out, but the bars seemed to be made of a indestrictible substance. Sam took a closer look at the ceiling, and saw a vent about 20 feet above him. He jumped up, and blasted the vent to pieces. He floated inside. He expected to see a tunnel, but what he saw was far more than what he thought. It was a highly decorated room, with tall, elegant shelves, and books stowed upon them.
    He took a step, and quickly regretted it.
     
  14. Doom Assassin - Book 1
    The flame eternal
    Chapter 1
    Book 1-The flame eternal
    Sam was not just a normal 15 year old. He had powers that were beyond ordinary. He worked for an assassin company, known as the Flame.
    They charged 1000 rupees to Assassinate anybody. Because of Sam, this buisness was very popular.
    Sam had just finished a job to Assassinate the evil warlord Zaetakeria, and succeeded easily. He lied in bed, staring up at the ceiling, when suddenly, he heard a rustling in the bushes by his house. He wandered outside to investigate, and right as he peeked into a bush, a cold hand grabbed him from behind and he was clubbed on the head.


    Chapter 2
    When Sam woke up, he was lying on a cold, rock, floor. A chain was on his leg, but he blasted it and it fell with a clatter to the ground. He saw he was inside a cage. He tried to blast his way out, but the bars seemed to be made of a indestrictible substance. Sam took a closer look at the ceiling, and saw a vent about 20 feet above him. He jumped up, and blasted the vent to pieces. He floated inside. He expected to see a tunnel, but what he saw was far more than what he thought. It was a highly decorated room, with tall, elegant shelves, and books stowed upon them.
    He took a step, and quickly regretted it.
    Chapter 3
    When Sam took the step, the panel he stepped on pushed down. A massive boulder started rolling after him. He ran as fast as he could, and barely jumped down the vent. He was back on the ground, and this time, he took a closer look at the cage. He saw a small hole, and blasted the dirt under it away. He could just barely squeeze through. When he got out, he was in a huge long corridor, and he started walking down it.
     
  15. Zaln I want to be a story critic
     
  16. I ain't starting no writing company. I don't like the responsibility.
     
  17. I would like to apply for iZaln Enterprises please