iZaln iEnterprises™ -Writing iEndorsements-

Title: Lost at sea

Sample: We were lost at sea after our sailing mission went terribly wrong. Now my sister is yelling at me, but luckily while at sea we killed a bear. Me and my sister like to get chocolate shakes in town.

 

Yup on putpose

 

Stupid spell check

 

Tense changing was because of spell check

 

Title: Villain's Life
Sample:
Lurking in the shadows, no one saw her until it was too late. The girl had her dagger on the bank guard's throat, gripped by a tan hand in a fingerless glove.
The guard, startled, had just awoken from his slumber. He could almost hear his Captain saying "Told you not to sleep on duty,Mel!" He snuck a glance at his partner, Hyl. Hyl had a suprised look on his face, which was deathly pale. That's when the guard noticed the crossbow bolt in Hyl's chest.
"W-who are you?" Mel stammered.
"I am your worst nightmare. I am Hawk." a sinister voice from behind stated. The last thing Mel remembered before blacking out was the dagger's pommel being slammed into his head.

 

Very nice. You just need better grammar regarding the quotes, which I'm willing to assist with, but otherwise this is very good.

iZaln

 

*cringes*

 

I am intereste in the "iRate" thing. Personally, I don't think I'll do anything if I join it, but I would like to ask, where would I find the iRate thing, because I think my story's missing something.

Story: Fading Fast: a Cheese production

 

Hmm... I'm wondering if I should post my story on the forums or not

 

I posted it a long time ago but it died

 

Bump

 

I am looking for supporters for this. If I can get at least 10 supporters I'll make a sign up thread. If I can get three judges and at least 6 writers I'll make the real deal. I'll explain more into detail later on

 

Hmm

 

I support

 

Well done man
btw it's xDavid-Nightx