Bastion can u edit the first part of my story plz? Here it is!: opening paragraph "where we going?" "somewhere." "well yea but why." "because I say so." "what if I don't want to?" "you have to" "look, I dont even know you. I wake up in the morning to find myself in some small shack in some desert with you staring down at me. You tell me to get up and follow you, I do cause I know you have the food, and I ask you two simple questions and you know what I'm just gonna sit here." "you stupid girl. Don't you realise that if u don't follow me the world as you know it will cease to be. You, willow Mia smith, are the worlds last hope, so get up and walk." thanks! It's a bit bad but hey! It's worth a shot! Lol enjoy!
Ok well I'm about to post the prologue of my storie. As of now i've got no title so I'll just post it here. And this is the first time I've ever posted something here so I don't know many of you. But feel free to be critical, but not too critical its a very rough draft. Enjoy!!
( insert title) There was a time when this world was lush and green. The wind still whistled in the trees. The water still ran in the rivers. And the sun still shone down, warming the earth. But happiness was not to last. A plague came upon the earth, bringing fire and death. The earth itself grew sick. Plants shriveled. Rivers dried up. Animals rotted from the inside. And the earth itself burned. So the humans scattered. Some went east, some went west. Some went underground. Into the darkness and shadows. Many years passed. Stories were whispered about world not in shadows. But many more years passed, and the humans traveled deeper into the dark. Stories became legends, legends became myths, and the myths themselves were soon forgotten. And deeper still the humans went, into the very bowels of the earth. And still more years passed. Until those old enough to remember a time in the sun had passed on. Until all that anyone remebered, was darkness.
Can you please read my story. It's called fairy fables(I know terrible title) and it's on the second page. Bump It if you want but anything else goes in feedback