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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Bastion, Jul 6, 2010.

  1. Zeek name it "The Assassin"
     
  2. I was gonna name it that, but was unsure if anyone already had that title for a story.
     
  3. Nope all clear
     
  4. I don't think so. Gimme credit for the title at end of story or I sue :p
     
  5. I'll pay for charges, Klzeek. ;-) You have workers pension and etc here.
     
  6. Okay cool! And dillybar I will. :)
     
  7. Awww we can file a case against this guy! Cmon klzeeek FIGHT THE POWAAA
     
  8. xD. Dillybar is mah friend!
     
  9. Chap 2 of my story the demon chronicles
    Is up
     
  10. Hey guys look at dictionary.com's word of the day it's funny!!
     
  11. What is it? I iz too lazy
     
  12. It's zaftig. Which is extremely odd. I sense conspiracy theories coming. It means one bodied or something. Are iG and Zaft going to join forces? 
     
  13. That'd be funny. :lol: And suspicious. 
     
  14. Next chapter of it doesn't have a name edited by Iwrite co sorry bout the grammar errors first draft


    Chapter 3

    I woke up the next morning in a heap on the floor,
    "hello nico," said a voice next to me "how did you sleep?"
    I noticed the voice was that of my friend Mark.
    "Not very well at all." I replied
    "I can't even contemplate what you are  going through at the moment," he said 
    "but I know it's hard."
    Mark had always understood me he could tell my moods and my thoughts it was as if he was inside my head, which had always scared me a little.
    "When did you get here?" I asked
    "I'm not to sure actually, but when I got here you were out cold."
    I wondered if he knew where sister was, I mean Mark knew everything about the city of Manhattan, and most of it's inhabitants, if he didn't know who would?
    "Mark do you know where my sister is? I was going to follow there car but I was knocked out."
    He replied "I may have a vague idea, but, you must heal before we leave." to my knowledge I wasn't to badly injured I tried to get up but I fell in pain 
    "don't move I've just bandaged the wound, it looks like you were stabbed in the leg,I'm surprised you weren't killed by the bullets I found in the wall, but I suppose you've never been badly hurt by machinery before that's maybe why you weren't shot."
    He was right a couple of years ago there was a large gang war in Manhattan and I was caught in a crossfire with my sister and I had tried to shield her with my body the bullets had curved around my body, after that I was known as a hero but I knew I had nothing to do with it, I could feel it in my bones it had come from another power an older unexplainable power.
     
  15. Very good!
     
  16. Thanks bastq I also did wat u said and added a bit to the father son scene
     
  17. Yeah it was a bit random the first time but much better
     
  18. I was trying to make it confusing but I took it to far
     
  19. Yeah, it didn't make sense