This is the prologue to one of my numerous stories and it's all I have so far. Title: The Blessing There is a rumor going around the world that certain people are "blessed" by a special council, and the "blessing" allows the people to excel at a certain thing. In order to be blessed your parents must find the council and prove you are worthy. Long ago the council found signs that a future council would have the responsibility of blessing a child that will either destroy the world or save it. They would have to choose between three children that are all worthy but the council won't know which is correct. One will save the world, one will destroy it, and the other will fail to do either. That day is coming very quickly.
Review mine. Be as mean as nessecary. It helps me think cause I can't think of chapter one. Btw that was the prologue in case I forgot to say.
Start out like this. "Ugghh it's too early to wake up!" "Come on Alex dear, we have to go somewhere special!" "I don't want to go!!" "You have to Alex." As I climbed out of bed and got dressed, I felt excited. I didn't know why at the moment, but I was about to find out. (you could write it like the main charecter is telling the story. The name Alex was just a stand-in name) Your prologue was really
(stupid submit button pressed it too early) *really good. If I read that put of a book in a bookstore, I would probably beg my parents to let me buy it. It would depend on what kind of mood their in. ~iDan~
Thanks that took about ten minutes to think up and then another ten to type and revise in the pal room
Ok I'm goin to bed. Dan you did help a lot with that cause I got an idea. Not telling nobody till it's done and I'll write it tomorrow. Goodnight peoples