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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Bastion, Jul 6, 2010.

  1. I came up with it in 5 minutes
     
  2. Take a little more time just take a hour to wright a good chapter or two
     
  3. I'm writing from my ipod so it's hard
     
  4. + it's my first story and I have lots of better ideasvfor stories
     
  5. I like it.
     
  6. But still it's very good it just needs a little tweek to make it a pwning story
     
  7. Yeah. It took me days to finish my first chapter lol

    ~iDan~
     
  8. Sam ran until his feet hurt. When he stopped to take a breather, he noticed his face on a poster on a gas station. It was a wanted poster



    What should Sam do next
     
  9. its pretty good..but you ned todecribe the sher sexynessssss od Dr. Angel
     
  10. Dude u don't have to start writing right away!!

    ~iDan~
     
  11. U could be SAMs mentor
     
  12. Okey dokey artichokey. Want a bio or something?
    Haven't met him yet

    ~iDan~
     
  13. I know but I think it's easier to keep the idea going


    PS What should Sam do and who should he meet
     
  14. Hmm he should meet someone mesterous who tells him about the rest of the stuff at the gas station
     
  15. Angel u want to be sam's mentor
     
  16. Here's an idea

    When Sam saw the poster, he freaked out. He ran even farther. Eventually he reached a cliff. He looked down the cliff. All he could see was blackness. He tried throwing himself off the cliff, but didn't fall into the darkness. Instead, he landed on top of it. He stood up. Suddenly he could make out a person coming towards him out of the darkness. Then the person spoke.
    "Sam, it is not safe for you anymore. You have to get out of here."
    "Out of where?"
    "Sam, listen to me. You are in a computer game. You need to get out. They have wanted posters up with your face on them."
    "I know, I saw one at a gas station back there. So where am I?"
    "You have reached the edge of this world. You are still in the game though."
    "So how do I get out? And who are you?"
    "My name is Lucas. Find the codemaster. Only he knows the way out. I must go."
    "But wait!! Where is the codemaster?"
    "Follow the path of blood. This will lead you to the codemaster. But be careful. It is very dangerous. Now I must go,"
    With that, the man who called himself Lucas was gone. Sam set out on his way make to his world to find the path of blood.
    (feel free to change anything u want)

    ~iDan~
     
  17. "Hello Sam." Sam spun around instantly. In front of him was a strange man dressed in a black trenchcoat. Sam felt that he knew this strange man. "Who are you?" Sam questioned nervously. The man said,"I am a friend. I have come to teach about the world you live in and how you can manipulate to your will." Sam was puzzeled. "The world you are living in is a computer program. It was created by ingeniuos people. But, it is falling apart. Very soon the entire program will perish and you will die. That is unless u can stop it."
     
  18. Give me characters for my story with abilities they have and phys description


    I also need title
     
  19. Name: Dan Cahill
    Origin: Unknown
    Powers: Can shapeshift and control over fire
    Age: 30-ish
    Weapons: Bo staff


    Didn't know what u wanted

    ~iDan~
     
  20. Title of story could be Virus

    ~iDan~