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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Bastion, Jul 6, 2010.

  1. Sweet! Nice pick lol!

    iZaln
     
  2. Wowwwwww...

    Some ***** wrote some **** on my stry and messed it up
     
  3. Aww. Never seem that kinda ****. Post on her wall. Wanna strip farm is possible?

    iZaln
     
  4. Not funny TNO. and too weak already tried.
     
  5. Hey TNO. Btw is Gal
    Coming back soon?

    iZ
     
  6. He said 2-5 weeks
     
  7. Mmmm.. Kk tell him I said hi. And that his néw name sucks. Lol. So how r u TNO.

    @Bast
    RockShe is a boy. And you
    Can just make a new story thread. Or ask the devs to delete it...

    iZ
     
  8. It's alive
     
  9. Bump. Chapter two is going really well. I'll post it later.
     
  10. I'm writing it on the notes app and it erased half my story so everything I had for chapter two is gone and so is half of chapter one... Copy and paste for chapter one re-write for chapter two... Great...
     
  11. Zaln i did a lot of editing on my new chapter 3.

    Ooh tht rlly stinks alex
     
  12. Im sorry alex lets see marodo
     
  13. I wrote all of it while I was half asleep. I don't remember most of it.
     
  14. Finished my next chap

    As they reached outside, Saint looked up into the sky. It was getting very cloudy and dark. He then turned to look at Gods Ninja. "Raaaaahhhh!" screamed Gods Ninja as he rushes at Saint. As Saint went to duck his punch, Gods Ninja landed a hard knee right in his face. Saint fell to the ground hard. Blood was streaming from his face. As he opened his eyes rain started pouring down. Suddenly Gods Ninja slowly strolled over to him, bent down, and spit right into Saint's face. That was it. He had had enough.

    He jumped up, and did a spinning back kick right into Gods gut. When Gods bent over, Saint tackled him into a muddy pool of water.

    "How do you like, eh?" yelled Saint, working himself up. He dunked Gods head over and over again meanwhile pulling his arm farther and farther behind his back. 

    "Ahhhh!" Gods screamed in pain. The next thing Gods Ninja did was unforgettable.

    He ripped his arm out of Saint's hold, and threw him off. He then continued to scream, "Get up! I said get up!" over and over again. The second Saint stood up, he knew it was a mistake. Gods pulled out a katana, resulting in awes from the ever growing crowd. 

    As he confronted Saint, Zaln yelled, "Saint, take this!" and pulled a short sword out from his shirt and tossed it to Saint. 

    With one fluid movement Saint caught the sword and twirled clashing blades with Gods, creating a small spark. They both jumped back. They both stood there for some time, thinking out their next move. Then it happened

    Both fighters started to charge each other, blades held to side. Then, as they passed each other, they both swung their blades. After passing the opponent they both stopped and started to sway. No one moved, no one breathed, no one looked away. Then it happened.

    Anyone edit? :-D
     
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  16. "How do you like it, eh?"
     
  17. Lol just saw that and fixed it ;-)