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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Bastion, Jul 6, 2010.

  1. I'll update it later
     
  2. RIP Chuck Norris...

    I finally killed him
     
  3. U never answered me if it was good or not.
     
  4. If What was good?

    Gratz TNO
     
  5. My story. And yeah congratz TNO. He had it coming
     
  6. Kk finsisged my second chapter of alliance 2:
    Chapter 2

    Bastion was always interested in karate ever since Yanshizai appeared in his life. Yamshizai was a master martial artist, and Bastion wanted to be one too, but no dojos (karate schools)  were nearby. "So you're makig your own dojo now?" asked Bastion eagerly. Yanshizai nodded with a grin. They were outside Ranyin's general store reading the poster advertising Yanshizai's new dojo. Bastion kept reading and reading. "Bastion, you can enroll, you're only 21 and need something to do," said Yanshizai. Yanshizai was worried that his friend was becoming obsessed with revenge, so he wanted Bastion to relax and keep his mind of his father. Bastion stood there, he questioned the idea. He didn't want to be taught by his friend, but he really wanted to learn the arts of Yanshizai's homeland. He nodded with a smile,  "I'll join."

    Hours went by and Bastion was getting ready for bed, he couldn't stop thinking about a karate dojo next door to his house. It's like his dreams were starting to come true. He laid in his bed looking out the window. When all of a sudden, men in black robes and masks appeared. Bastion saw them run into the town plaza. They came out with a married couple and burnt the place to the ground. The screams of the burningg children scarred Bastion and kept ringing in his ears. The captured woman screamed and cursed at these terrible men. These black-robed men kept doing so to every house besides Bastion's. Bastion ran downstairs and took his father's two-handed blade, Foxbane, and woke his mother up from a deep sleep. "Mother, you must leave the house now!" said Bastion, urgently.
    His mother replied,"But Bast-"
    "NOW!!" Bastion wasn't ready to lose his last parent. The screams bursted through the thin air and blood filled the well. Dead bodies were stacked by the well. Bastion waited for the men, aimed ready at the door of his house, waiting. Then confused, Bastion heard the screams of men and splashes. "What the-" said Bastion. Then all of a sudden the door was knocked over and a dead man dressed in these black robes fell in. Another man came and Bastion shot at him, but right when he hit a sword came out of the man's chest. Bastion was extremely confused.

    "Bastion?" said the mysterious man. Bastion immediately recognized the voice," Yanshizai you're here! What the hell took you so long?!" yelled Bastion. "No time to explain, draw your sword, too many innocent lives have fallen today. We won't let anymore fall." encourage Yanshizai. Bastion and Yanshizai ran out of the house and fought these evil men. They had a large variety of weapons. Some the duo didn't even recognize. 

    "Where are these people from?" asked Bastion. Yanshizai was troubled by this question. "They're elite mercenaries from almost every country in the world," declared Yanshizai as he cut the neck of a large mace-man. "OW!!!" said Yanshizai.

    "What?! What happened?!" asked Bastion worriedly as he chopped straight down the skull of another man. "Blood got in my eye!!" complained Yanshizai. Bastion started laughing. Yanshizai felt embarrassed and had tk make up for a stupid error like that. He jumped on a man's head and popped himself up. As he was in the air, he took daggers and threw them at every man in sight. He then did a double backflip and cut both arms off of a very pitiful victim. "Pssh, show-off," said Bastion. Yanshizai smirked. Hours went on of pure fighting. But finally all the men were dead and Bastion and Yanshizai stood there observing their surroundings while trying to catch their breath. Bastion walked up to one of the dead men and observed the enemies uniform. Bastion's heart dropped right down through an abyss. "These uniforms, they were seen at my father's place of death. The man that leads them killed MY FATHER!!!!!" yelled Bastion angrily.
     
  7. I revived CN
     
  8. Liar

    I like it tons very good two mistakes: of=off and tk=to
     
  9. Small I like it, only part I dislike is that I die early
     
  10. Yeah sorry
     
  11. But ur not dead
     
  12. The post with small in it isn't to you. One with tk=to etc was to you
     
  13. Bastion. Sorry man it was first come first serve. U almost had part of Riann. Instead u had part of dead guy
     
  14. You said I was a writer when do I start tdogo7
     
  15. Any time you like you write your own story