I'll post the beginning of the first chapter of my story. Chapter 1 "Dan, we've got a job for you" "What is it, boss?" Suddenly, a pic appeared on the screen in front of me. "This is Dr. (still needs name). He develops nuclear weapons. He is giving a nuclear missile to every contry for free in 2 weeks. We think that he is up to something." "But wouldn't people be smart enough to not accept them? He's obviously up to something." "The world leaders are just grateful to have another weapon to have. Everyone's scared of the other countries. Dr. ????? might be looking for a World War 3, which no one would win if everyone had nuclear weapons. He might also have rigged the missiles to do something. We need you and your team to find out what's going on and stop him. His factory is in Australia. Can I count on your team?" "The Land Down Under!! Always wanted to go there!!" "Dan, this isn't a vacation. Please be serious for once." "I know, boss. My team and I can do it. We're professionals." "Good. Don't dissapoint me" "I won't, boss." Meet my team. I'm Dan, the leader of the group, and the most fun-loving. I always joke around. All the jokes I know, they can come in handy sometimes on our missions. Bastion is 2nd-in-command. If anything ever happens to me, he's in charge. He was been training in many types of martial arts from a young age. He's a great person to have on your team, but he dosent know how to have fun. Sorry I didn't finish it didn't have my list of charecters on me. ~iDan~
Once we finally landed at camp, we all went straight to Seargent to report our mission. "Ah, you're back!" "Yeah Sarge, and all breathing." Told Zaln. "Good and please, I told you call me Josh!" "Sorry Josh, it's just...well we didn't get Osterly." "You gotta be kidding me...Team Gold was entirely wiped out in that mission..." "Oh my God..." "Look we want to finish the mission, we've gotta move on. We got a new recruit waiting outside. He's pretty clueless, so prep him up, okay?" "Will do." As they walked out of the breifing room a small man with jet black hair slowly walked up and introduced himself as James Sinclair, nicknamed "Saint". As Saint looked at them, they were quite a weird group. There was one normal build caucasian, who was supposedly brothers with an asian man dressed in black. The last man was just gigantic. He was incredibly muscular wearing a shirt with cut-off sleeves, and a band of bullets hanging over his shirt. They had weird nicknames too. One was Bastion, another was Zaln, and the lasts was McGreen, but he didn't even want to get into it. "Saint, we are an elite Spec-Ops force dedicated to destroying the NRA. Our mission is called Operation Storm. Welcome aboard." welcomed Bastion. Immediately after there were various handshakes and congratulations between the men. "How about we show him around camp?" questioned McGreen. "Sounds good enough to me." agreed Zaln. "Alright then." After several minute of walking and pointing, they finally reached base point. "This is where our meals are served." explained Bastion. "Lets go! I'm starving!" yelled Saint as he ran ahead. Just as Bastion and the other stepped inside they saw Saint accidently bump into one of the larger, clearly angry soldiers, and fall to the ground. "HEY!" He angrily roared, "WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING?" "Nothing sir! I'm sorry it was an accident really!" Then Zaln interupted. "Hey Gods, lay off him, huh?" "Stay out of this!" "Tch. Suit yourself." "Let's take this outside!" Ordered Gods Ninja as he dragged Saint outside base point.
Idk zaln says it all the time though. I think it's like a disappointed sound. He told me to put his personality in the story. You can ask him about tch himself he says it a lot.