It's A Long Story- Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Allioss, Aug 8, 2011.

  1. Thank you :)
     
  2. The First thing I see when I wake up is two new chapters.
    HAPPY DANCE :D
    I feel so sorry for Poiz and Wolfgang... Why did he have to die? Well, I hope that he gets "revived" ;)
    Your writing style is as good as always, if not better :)

    Keep up the awesome chapters :D
     
  3. Chapter seventeen up...secrets and emotions revealed! Dun dun duuuunnnn!
     
  4. Oh, that was awesome :D
    Poor Poiz... She really loved Wolfgang.
    BUT THE LEAF "BATTLE"! That was just... Beautiful. It was a perfect description and captured the beauty that was surely supposed to be envisioned.
    And Poiz remember her sister :D

    This is all kinds of awesome :)
     
  5. This story is amazingly well written, I really normally hate this genre but this is good. Please don't stop for ages again! It'll make me sad :(
     
  6. *wonders when my Character will be in there* [Lol, I'm and alt of Tigerstarandjaystar and Welcome_To_My_Life]
     
  7. All in due time. She'll be there the next time you see fantasy Geoff :)
     
  8. :3 ok!! Great story by the way!
     
  9. Sorry guys, I would've written/posted a chapter tonight but I am waaaay too tired. Expect one tomorrow, though! 
     
  10. Chapter eighteen is up! Just realized that I accidentally pressed "t" twice in "chapter eighteen" on the story. Smarticle particles. I have them. ._.
     
  11. Yay, an awesome chapter, yet again :)
    Will we get to know more about Poiz's chapter? She seems interesting ;)
     
  12. Stop with the cliff hangers D:
     
  13. Hmmm I seem to remember someone telling me yesterday that there would be no cliff hanger on this chapter. Wonder who that could be...
     
  14. I tried! But it was just a natural stopping point, I swear!


    Please don't stab my food again
     
  15. Cliffhanger? :O
    Fine, I'll accept it, as the chapter was AH-MAZING :D
    It was intriguing and funny. Great :D
    Your writing style just gets better and better with every chapter, and that's like making awesome even MORE awesome ;)
     
  16. Chapter 20 posted. Sorry for the delay, I'm being lazy.  And accidental double post :/
     
  17. It was a very good chapter :) I liked how it had humor in it, yet it contained action and mystery. What role will the cat play? I guess we will find out in a coming chapter... Also, I just LOVE how you can seamlessly switch between the past and present. You make it feel so... Natural :)

    Your story is one of the few stories that I return to here on KaW and it always makes me happy when it's updated. Anyway, your writing has actually evolved a bit from last time and it's even BETTER now, though I don't know how that is possible... o_O Great job, nevertheless :D
     
  18. :3 thank you Okami!