It's A Long Story- Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Allioss, Aug 8, 2011.

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  1. More will be posted tonight! :3
     
    #121 Allioss, Nov 11, 2011
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    #122 *Rangoth (01), Nov 12, 2011
  3. YAY! Sorry for raging at you on WattPad, for a second I thought you stopped writing it.
    Though one thing, though Geoff might believe Vy's message, wouldn't it seem more like a prank message to him?
     
    #123 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 12, 2011
  4. I'll have to make an intelligence roll for him. (Aka- 1d20 must be under Geoff's intelligence score :3)
     
    #124 Allioss, Nov 13, 2011
  5. What do you mean 1d20?
     
    #125 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 13, 2011
  6. 1 20 sided dice
    ^1
    ^d
    ^20 :D
     
    #126 Allioss, Nov 13, 2011
  7. Aw the spaces didn't work :|
    But 1 for one dice you roll, d=dice 20- how many sides the die has
     
    #127 Allioss, Nov 13, 2011
  8. Ahh. I get it now. Hopefully it will be 12 or higher, lol.
     
    #128 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 13, 2011
  9. If anyone ever gets bored, you can actually email Alice's email, and I'll try to think of an Alice-like response :p
     
    #129 Allioss, Nov 15, 2011
  10. Seriously? Lol. I'll try it sometime, 'cause I need to study for tests that I have...
     
    #130 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 17, 2011
  11. Chapter 14 up. Alice's secrets revealed (well at least to Geoff)
     
    #131 Allioss, Nov 26, 2011
  12. As awesome as ever :D
    LOVELOVELOVELOVE :)
     
    #132 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 26, 2011
  13. Thanks! :)
     
    #133 Allioss, Nov 27, 2011
  14. Suprisingly little reaction^.^
    Are you gonna kill me?
    No.
    Oh okay!
     
    #134 *Rangoth (01), Dec 1, 2011
  15. Please post this on GaW!
     
    #135 RenamedPhoenix, Dec 4, 2011
  16. Chapter ten up...super sorry about the lack of chapters! My New Year's resolution will be to write more. 
    And Phoenix, okie dokie, will be done over the course of today/tomorrow. :D
     
    #136 Allioss, Jan 8, 2012
  17. And naturally, it's supposed to be Chapter Fourteen. :|
     
    #137 Allioss, Jan 8, 2012
  18. Who drew that picture?
     
    #138 FeatherHunter, Jan 8, 2012
  19. Me :p it's not very good, but meh. Can't edit on iPhone.
     
    #139 Allioss, Jan 8, 2012
  20. YES YES YES YES!!!! YOUR WRITING THIS AGAIN! love it
     
    #140 BonkersLeighRose, Jan 8, 2012
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