It's A Long Story- Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Allioss, Aug 8, 2011.

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  1. The only That I think you need to fix are a few minor spelling eros but so far I LOVE ITTT and I'm not slappy anymore :)
     
    #101 *RadioactiveGerbil (01), Oct 28, 2011
  2. Chap 10 up C:
     
    #102 Allioss, Oct 29, 2011
  3. So...









    Epicly...








    AWESOME!
    The inter-world story is getting clearer, and when she said "US", it meant "Vy", which is obviously some inner-self, which she takes the brown pills to hide away from.



    It's seriously AWESOME!
     
    #103 RenamedPhoenix, Oct 30, 2011
  4. It's official, Phoenix can read minds
     
    #104 Allioss, Oct 30, 2011
  5. Nah, I'm just AWESOME.


    And so is your story  *Cutesy moment*.
     
    #105 RenamedPhoenix, Oct 30, 2011
  6. Too. Much. AWESOMENESS!

    Keep it up ;)
     
    #106 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Oct 30, 2011
  7. Aw thanks guys ^^
     
    #107 Allioss, Oct 30, 2011
  8. thats a mean place to end it
     
    #108 *Rangoth (01), Oct 30, 2011
  9. I mean, EVERYWHERE would be a mean place to end it.. But still>.>
     
    #109 *Rangoth (01), Oct 30, 2011
  10. Im going away for the weekend.. Quickly get the next chapter out!:0
     
    #110 *Rangoth (01), Nov 3, 2011
  11. Hello- chapter 12 is going to take a bit, I wrote it but I feel I need to add more detail. Cross your fingers for Tuesday! : )
     
    #111 Allioss, Nov 6, 2011
  12. Cheers!
     
    #112 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 6, 2011
  13. I'm sorry! D: will a double chapter post on Thursday make up for it? :(
     
    #113 Allioss, Nov 9, 2011
  14. Anyone going to the midnight release of Skyrim?
     
    #114 Allioss, Nov 11, 2011
  15. Back:D
     
    #115 *Rangoth (01), Nov 11, 2011
  16. And im confused.
    If she made everything why would she be working for anybody?
     
    #116 *Rangoth (01), Nov 11, 2011
  17. I'll read what I missed after school :)

    Also, I haven't gone to the Skyrim release (Elder Scrolls: Skyrim)...
     
    #117 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 11, 2011
  18. My dad got an epic gaming computer just for Skyrim- he is awesome.
     
    #118 Allioss, Nov 11, 2011
  19. I'm waiting for Halo: Combat Evolved Anniversary.
    Just four days left!!!!
     
    #119 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 11, 2011
  20. Just read the chapters.
    OMG! You BETTER GET ME MOAR, RIGHT NAO! This story is AWESOME!
     
    #120 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 11, 2011
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