It's A Long Story- Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Allioss, Aug 8, 2011.

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  1. If you can find Alice's mathematical error in Chapter 8, you get a cookie...:p
     
    #81 Allioss, Oct 3, 2011
  2. I loooove you for posting a new chapter :D
    It's really great and sad :( WHY DID WOLFGANG HAVE TO DIIE? *throws a chair* xD :(
     
    #82 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Oct 4, 2011
  3. Because it's vital to the plot! *stares at cat for waking me up at 5:45*
     
    #83 Allioss, Oct 4, 2011
  4. Hmm... Then it's okay ;)
     
    #84 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Oct 4, 2011
  5. I'm guessing the "Multiply the books in this library" was a typo because you forgot the "by the books", so therefore it is wrong...?
     
    #85 RenamedPhoenix, Oct 5, 2011
  6. No..it's obvious if you think about it...hint: you must find the answer fair and *HACKCOUGH* square *COUGHEVFKBEK*
     
    #86 Allioss, Oct 5, 2011
  7. However, that is the second error :$
    So Phoenix:

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    #87 Allioss, Oct 5, 2011
  8. OMG! HOW DID YOU FIND MY SECRET WEAKNESS! :shock:
     
    #88 RenamedPhoenix, Oct 5, 2011
  9. I'm guessing it's that square would be with the "2", whilst cubes is with the "3", so I'm guessing you meant to say, "take that number and multiply it to the power of 8"?
     
    #89 RenamedPhoenix, Oct 5, 2011
  10. Double cookie all the way :p

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    #90 Allioss, Oct 6, 2011
  11. Bump...posting chap 9 as soon as I find the thread :3
     
    #91 Allioss, Oct 25, 2011
  12. OMG I love you :D
    The chapter was awesome and I'm so happy right now :)
     
    #92 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Oct 25, 2011
  13. I'm happy I made someone happy :D
     
    #93 Allioss, Oct 25, 2011
  14. Well... Who was the assassin she killed...?
    Or will we learn it in the next chapter?!?!


    DUN DUN DUN DUN!

    Also, I love the story, keep it going ;)
     
    #94 RenamedPhoenix, Oct 25, 2011
  15. I will! I keep thinking of what will happen next, and already know how it ends :p
     
    #95 Allioss, Oct 26, 2011
  16. 3 things

    1 THIS STORY IS AMAZING

    2 were the needles in her face still since they got there? Through that whole thing?

    3 the elven peoples and kaka(something) were watching her through the whole time that the thing between her and the assassin was happening?

    And okay i lied..

    4 i was late for school cause of this story
     
    #96 *Rangoth (01), Oct 26, 2011
  17. For 1, thank you very much :D
    2- hmm, sorry, Quarin took them out during the 'healing'
    3- there were still enemies left, however I have yet to describe those battles.

    Thanks for reading, everyone! Chapter 10 should be up this weekend, but it's a 3 day weekend so I might -coughcough- probably will -cough- get distracted :p
     
    #97 Allioss, Oct 27, 2011
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    #98 *Rangoth (01), Oct 27, 2011
  19. And hey with her screeming and such you think everyone would turn and look lol
     
    #99 *Rangoth (01), Oct 27, 2011
  20. Indeed
     
    #100 Allioss, Oct 27, 2011
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