The story is so amazing! I love the idea of: The Library of Names (There is actually something almost EXACTLY like it in: The Gatekeepers by Anthony Horowitz. -good books.), and the intervention between that world and ours. I also love it how you reveal small details that make you KNOW Alice is the vampire, yet you don't know if this is a separate world or not. By small (or sometimes large...) details I mean: Alice's "night job". Alice gets sunburned VERY easily. Alice's flask has some unnamed red juice that she says is (cranberry juice? I forgot what she called it.) I'm sorry I didn't post feedback, I love this story so much, and the lack of feedback was because I didn't find it. My forums have been lagging A LOT lately and you also must have posted the feedback when the hurricane struck my house, knocking out power in my street (And ONLY my street and ONE other street in the ENTIRE region GRRRRRRRRR) for two days.
Wow Phoenix, thanks and goodluck with the hurricane! I've never read that book before, but the Library of Names has a very important role. Also, it's pomegranate juice, with a bit of blue berry for flavor. At least, that's what the label says...
Ahhhh, also, I meant to say you must have posted the STORY* (not feedback) when the hurricane hit. Don't worry, it's all over now... With a few horrible casualties where I live.
A fifty year old father of four jumped into a flooded street with live wires to save a 5-year-old kid who was walking in there. The man was killed but the 5 year old kid is in the hospital with serious burns. I think this happened in MY OWN ZIP CODE :cry: I hate these stories, they're so sad :cry: